On Her Wedding Night, the Ruthless Black Lotus Was Pounced on by the Sickly Young Lord

It's still very nice to see so far.

Judging from the two articles, the author's routine is more obvious, hahaha, and he especially likes to use "people's words are scary" to build momentum. And he likes sickly and beautiful boys. Next door, he cures Li Yuan and then comes Yue Qixuan. This article is actually good-looking, the plot design is quite exciting, and the characters of the protagonist are quite likable, and the little persimmon is also quite cute. Maybe because it is not long, there is no more detailed development, which is a pity. Although I can imagine that if it is expanded too much, it will be a "masterpiece", but I really like the character of the protagonist... I still think In order to have a Dongyue chapter, I briefly teased it, but overall it was too hasty, so I just threw up the outline at the end... And then it was too plain, too plain... Personally, the character design of Little Persimmon is cuter than that of Li Yuan next door... It would be great if there is a chance to expand this article. Although the design of the heroine is also quite hasty in this article, her character is cuter. Comparing the three sickly characters, in fact, the one closest to the sickly character is Yue Qixuan, and then Pei Jue. Apart from being sick and then cured, Li Yuan has no character flaws. Pei Jue may have some breasts, so she is indeed the cutest

The foreshadowing is too long, and the villain's operation is not very good. The success is all due to everyone's forcible intelligence, and there are all kinds of ups and downs. I can't suppress my stupidity. Even when the protagonist is slapped in the face, I don't feel relieved. The data in the back may not be good. I posted a few chapter outlines and ended it hastily.

In fact, I can write more, write some extra stories about them, I want to see it~(^з^)-☆

Nice