The Abandoned Concubine's Counterattack: the Evil King Is Busy Chasing His Wife Every Day

The subject matter is very good, the male and female protagonists are also well designed, and the writing is not bad... But the biggest problem is that there are too many explanations. In fact, we readers can understand it without so many psychological activities and off-site explanations! Author: If you can see it, please accept our proposal... No more than 15 sentences of useful dialogue will be found in the two chapters! Unless you are trying to make up the word count, you should change this "verbose" problem... The writing is really good... I have been a loyal fan for a year, so I would like to give you some loyal suggestions!

The storyline is wonderfully written, coherent, and engaging. It's just that the update is too slow

The female protagonist is above average in terms of force but lacks IQ. The male protagonist is not stupid but lacks emotional intelligence. I can't stand it any longer. I will withdraw.

It's very interesting. It's different from other time-travel novels. It has a lot of details. Each scene is described in detail, and each character's psychology is also described in detail. However, some places are a bit far-fetched in logic. Overall, it's very interesting. I hope it will be updated soon. But at the current pace and the foreshadowing, I don't think it's going to be unfinished. It's estimated that there won't be a thousand chapters that can't be completed🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹. I'll continue to pay attention.

It's so fake. I've been verbose for so long and haven't set out to investigate the bandits yet. I've talked so much about my ex-husband. The more I write, the worse it gets.

The male protagonist is a common man, and the female protagonist is a dog-licker. The two of them are like fools, and they call it low emotional intelligence. All kinds of cliche plots were played out over and over again, and all kinds of gossip were said back and forth. In order to set off the heroine, the supporting characters are written as stupid as pigs, and their words and actions are illogical.

I finally finished reading it. The framework and plot are quite good, but the author's writing skills are not good enough and the good framework was wasted! It's too ink-stained. The author was so worried that readers wouldn't understand it that he broke everything apart and crushed it before writing it. Is he treating the readers like primary school students? Regardless of whether it is useful or not, the plot and scene descriptions are all verbose and long-winded. There are only three or two sentences of dialogue in each chapter. The rest are just random thoughts and have nothing to do with the plot! The heroine couldn't set it up, she set up the heroine's character and then subverted it herself... And the heroine has lived in ancient times for 20 years and still has an idea of minutes? There is so much I want to complain about, I can't even put it into words! The most uncomfortable thing is that if the hole is dug but not filled, the mission of Tianyi Pavilion will not be found? ? ? The Crown Princess's child is gone? ? ? Beibei's illness is incurable? ? ? Yao Wuchen is no longer arrested? ? ? Who poisoned the heroine and left it unchecked? ? ? The heroine suffers from abdominal pain and vomiting and there is no further explanation? ? ? Isn't Jiang Xun's life experience revealed? ? ? How did the twins finally come out? ? ? What happened to Nan Yan's father and son because of the passing of the imperial seal? ? ? There are too many holes left unfilled, and it feels like you haven't finished reading! Two words, uncomfortable! ! ! ! ! ! ! 2024, 5, 29

When I first started reading it, I could give it a good review. After reading over a hundred chapters, the most positive reviews I got, the more I read on, I felt that I shouldn't even give a negative review. It was really disgusting! The back-and-forth verbal wars and long-winded explanations! Why are there so many good reviews?

The plot is novel and interlocking and fascinating. I really look forward to the heroine regaining her identity and the jokes between the two little buns and the hero.

I've read over 800 chapters and the male and female protagonists are still misunderstanding each other. The two characters in the story are the kind of people who don't talk much, and the pacing is draggy.