Everyone: at the Beginning, the Sword Is Like Fire, Burning the Sky and Destroying the Earth!

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It's well written, I hope there will be more

No more, I'm sorry, I voted 11

Chapter 18 What did you write? From encountering a ghoul to when the captain issues tactics and begins action, until the second ghoul causes personal injury. Are you telling me that the protagonist can't react? And should male pastors die? Moreover, the mercenaries and captains are in their 30s, and the priest in the team actually told me that he was panicking? Just because he hasn't attended your academy, his combat skills have been honed from level 1 to level 30, and he's still the same as a freshly minted rookie? The male archer couldn't react, but the female archer did. People tell you that he or she is miserable, but ask you about her past experiences, why do you drag others to get on the bed while you are still alive? You actually have to go to someone else's house, why can't you write it as the protagonist and save the whole team out of gratitude? Taking advantage of someone's situation and giving him two bottles of potion before leaving is like paying for whoring.

A bit unfinished

Chapter 25 I can't stand it anymore. Either don't form a team. Since I joined the team, there is not much help from the front. Well, the boss is gone in seconds, and then he kills people with a moral kidnapping!

Good

Quick update, can't sleep at night

I couldn't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 18. Feeling sick. What does it feel like to be warm? ? What dew relationship? You can't control your dick? ? ? Cut it off. Such an irresponsible person.

The plot is rubbish, the pig's feet have no character