Innocent Ono Doctor

It has a beginning, and the beginning is good, but the result is too sloppy.

The author's ideas are good, but his narrative skills are too sloppy. It's like a flower that lacks some green leaves to embellish it. In short, it's all in one word. The author may be a newbie. I hope the author's writing style will improve in the future and he will be full of witty words. 🌹🌹🌹

When writing a novel, don't include Douyin. If you say that I think your novel can be read, what kind of rubbish do you put on Douyin, social Douyin, and people on Douyin for no reason? It's a novel. Is it interesting to say it is so exaggerated? These are really yours. I just pulled some of your novels online.

The plot is messy, the male protagonist is inconsistent, has an unstable temperament, is pretentious in many places, and has constant typos. The ending is abrupt and makes people feel uncomfortable.

If a man wants to be loved by a woman, he must be capable!