National Fate: Random Marriages with the Ten Thousand Clans, and I Can See the Hints

I'm the author, so I can't give myself too much praise🥰🥰🥰🤣🤣🤣

Very nice and a bit astringent, suitable for LSP consumption. Do you know what LSP means? Lovely Special Person. Lovely and unique person. The writing is fresh, rich in emotion, full of characters, clear in organization, well-structured, reasonable in plot, full of ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions, strong artistic appeal, and the finishing touch at the end, which is profound, thought-provoking, and long-lasting. There are unique identities and backgrounds, profound yin and yang laws of heaven, different origins and personalities, complicated love and hatred, there are foreshadowings that follow the plan, there are witty words that flash of inspiration, there are passionate battles, there are tender entanglements, there is perseverance until death, there are straightforwardness that responds to the situation, there are heartfelt warnings that lead people to do good, there are direct warnings, and there are words that are sophisticated in dealing with the world. So it's not too much to give likes and highlights, right?

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The National Fortune Marriage Stream is quite interesting. There are many races, the content is humorous, and the protagonist can see prompts. The husband and wife cooperate and the work is not tiring.

One word: water!

I can understand if the author is a newbie. If there is a certain writing style, I don't understand it if it is written like this. The live broadcast of the Dragon Kingdom you made is okay, but why do you have to review it again when you return to the live broadcast of the Dragon Kingdom after the previous plot has passed? Can't we write at the same time? And it's enough to just write and introduce them casually. Why do you need to write in detail to introduce their psychological activities? Is it necessary? It's really unnecessary. If you really want to write it in detail, you might as well write it in detail during the wedding! Guaranteed that many people will like to watch it!! I'm not slandering you either. It's really uncomfortable to watch, you know? I have watched a lot of live broadcasts. The author wrote a chapter about the barrage posted by friends in the live broadcast room. I have never felt so uncomfortable. After writing, I returned to normal and continued the main line. After you return to the live broadcast in Longguo, you have to introduce their psychological activities and let them express their opinions. After that, you have to write the previous main line. In fact, your writing of the main plot was okay, but when you came back to write the Dragon Kingdom live broadcast, it was very bad. Out of 10 points, I can only give you 0.1.

The author gives you a small suggestion: write less about reality and less barrages. Three or four articles will be enough. Write more about another space. I have spent thousands of hours reading novels and I promise you that it will be more enjoyable to read and write like this.

Very good, very good👍This content is very consistent with my wishes. It's basically the same as what I imagined. However, there are some parts of the author that I suggest you to criticize and add more words. How good is it? As for those panels, does it matter? But that kind of content is still very good if it is a little watery ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

It's too watery, it all depends on what the audience says, and the audience is also forced to be subdued.