Back in the Apocalypse, I Fish for Sharks in My Pocket Dimension

The heroine is very powerful, she has a golden finger, she is not a holy mother! The writing of the male protagonist is a bit humble. In the relationship between the male and female protagonists, the male protagonist has always given. Like a robot, he is not protecting the female protagonist, washing and cooking, and serving as a 24-hour personal nanny/bodyguard. Most of the time, it is not obvious that he is in love. Can't he write about the content of the female protagonist's contribution to the male protagonist? The interaction between the male and female protagonists is not very sweet, and it is not as sweet as the CP. It is a post-apocalyptic story with CP at least. The subject matter is good, there are systems and powers, but what does the heroine say? A little too cold? I have read a post-apocalyptic article that the official has been actively protecting the people. The hero and heroine are soldiers who have been protecting the people. The subject matter of this book is also very good. It not only has mutant plants and mutant animals, but it can also be written brilliantly. It should be about 1 million words. Now it is really unfinished. Just a few hundred words tell the readers that the apocalypse is over and the crisis is over. It's not exciting enough. There aren't many parts about fighting zombies. I don't know why I just stopped writing it. Many places are unreasonable, but fortunately I'm not a perfectionist.

After reading it, um... I decisively blacklisted it. It was well written. Don't write it next time. The idea of strong women and men being stronger in the apocalypse is really disliked by people, otherwise they would secretly compete with each other. In several dangers, the hero saves the heroine. I feel so irritated. And if you want to control your own destiny, you must have enough strength, strength, strength. Can all you pretend in your mind is to become stronger, and buy things before the end of the world. When buying a car, why is it that there is only one car, a sedan, and other cars with higher chassis are not available? They are all for sale, and when the weather gets cold, they just say they have stocked up on quilts, why not clothes? There are also many supplies such as heating equipment and cooling equipment that can be purchased before the apocalypse. Without preparation in advance, after the apocalypse, you can only drive the air conditioner and feel that it consumes fuel. I am really convinced.

It was fine in the early stage, but in the later stage I felt that the heroine was not good enough. She just wanted to live a good life for herself and be popular, and she would not help ordinary people even if she was capable. I have always felt that if you help others, others will take advantage of you. However, the author's ideas are still not well written. Since the heroine is bound to the system, it is natural for her to make some contributions. Is the system just for her to enjoy herself? Moreover, it is a zombie novel, but there are not many chapters about fighting zombies, and there are a lot of emotional scenes in the later stage. But please, author, this is a zombie novel, you can at least write more plots about zombies.

It's very interesting to write, I hope the update can be faster.

The male protagonist always uses his mental power to control the female protagonist Jiang Jiang Niang Niang... Isn't this really rape? Moreover, in the plot, there is always a feeling that the heroine is forced to be cold-blooded in order not to be a virgin.

This is probably what happened when I saw the heroine's speech in Chapter 30. Although you came from the apocalypse, there is nothing wrong with having a bottom line and not killing innocent people indiscriminately, but people are killing people and want to kill you, and you still act like you are not guilty enough to die. The apocalypse has really not taught you how to be a human being. No wonder you were stupid in your previous life. If there is no male protagonist and system in this life, it feels like the female protagonist will still die without a brain.

It looks good. It would be great if the male and female protagonists had a child.

The system rarely appears

Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! The male and female protagonists are so sweet!!!

Nice! Must look good! I came here from the author's serialized book. When I was updating that book, I just flipped through this book to relieve my boredom of updating the book ('▽'). It is very well written. Everyone has their own thoughts, and their IQ is also online. I recommend it (๑>◡<๑)👍🏻 The happiest thing for me is that this book is finished. I can read it as fast as I want, and I can still read the ending. It's very refreshing ᖰ⌯'▾'⌯ᖳ