After Pretending to Be a Fake Daughter in the Control Group, I Gave up at the Beginning!

I really like the plot. There are so many typos that it feels like a machine translation. The male protagonist's character becomes more interesting the further you read it. I really want to see Mr. Shen and Liu Liu falling in love! ! ! The heroine design is also quite interesting. The original heroine is also very handsome. There is no real or fake daughter to spend money on. I love it.

First place on the list✌️

The names are confusing, the sentences don't make sense, and the writing is average. As for the character, the heroine is so stupid and sweet that I can't stand it anymore.

It feels very ordinary because there are many typos and it is really hard to read. Moreover, the name of the heroine was changed but not completely. Sometimes she was called Shi Xi and sometimes she was called Yu Liu. Her parents' house in the countryside was sometimes called the Yu family, and sometimes their surname was Qiao. She calls the original heroine's full name with a sister added after it. It's very painful to read (especially the heroine's three-letter name). I really can't read it anymore. Please look at the typos. I'm even guessing what the author wants to write. There is also a big pit. The heroine is allergic to seafood and she and the hero go to a full crab feast, which is outrageous. I have abandoned the article, but I still want to encourage the author to keep working hard.

The beginning of the plot is good, but the character design feels quite contradictory. I don't know why there is a system to mess with it. The heroine knows that the original heroine is good but she can't really treat her. It's a bit confusing to watch her best friend forcing herself to die. This heroine's character is quite contradictory and conflicting. There is also a person who suddenly knows everything without logic. His mental activities are not white, but his behavior is not white (every time he defends himself, he is lonely). If he is more decisive and demanding, the original heroine will not be misunderstood every time. In the end, there are too many typos, which disrespects both my own book and the readers.

There are a lot of typos, and the sentences are sometimes inconsistent. The heroine tells her friends not to cause trouble, but her friends do it. This friend is even more brainless and keeps talking, relying on his own imagination.

The author couldn't even figure out the names of the characters. There was a stream now and then not, and there were many typos. The sisters who couldn't stand the typos and omissions persuaded them to quit.

It's like AI typing, the sentences don't make sense, the plot is weird, there are many typos, and the character names are often wrong, and I can't stand it anymore.

1. The names of the main characters are too confusing, and the content depends on the context; 2. The inexplicable system has no sense of existence, and I don't know how it promotes the plot, so it is completely unnecessary; 3. Such an awesome boss sister, normal people will hug her, but here is reduced to a background board, which has nothing to do with the heroine's money and career. If it is a composition, it is actually off-topic. 4. Half of it is written and the whole text is finished. This should be considered a eunuch.

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