My Wife Is a Comatose Princess? I'm Over the Moon!

After reading it, the overall structural idea is very clear, and it is true that there is only one female protagonist, and it is not a stallion novel. It was very comfortable for me to read, with very few typos. It is recommended to read it. I hope the author will not mess up the article and add a written version. This may be the reason. Not many people read it. Others are pretty good. Hey, cheers for the author.

1. Before the 100th chapter, I either wrote the system to earn points, or I could write three or four chapters of water poems. After the 100th chapter, I will solve the case with ink. I am really speechless in this book. Isn't the emotional story between the princess and the two of them the first main line? What is this? It takes more than 290 chapters for the princess to open her eyes. It's quite speechless, and the writing is a bit speechless. 2. The character of the protagonist. To put it bluntly, there are a group of cowards who dare not expose others who dare not touch. We don't know why you have to add an overlord's courage. And he has been taking care of this princess for several years. What needs does a man in his 20s have? I sit next to a big beauty every day and don't think about anything. I just like it. She feels a bit like a monk. 3. The author, you really don't have a good grasp of the rhythm. If the heroine can get better after more than 150 chapters, the two of them will be together, walking through the wind and rain, watching each other, that's not bad. 4. But it's almost 300 chapters and I can't speak. I've really lost my ink. Overall, it's quite satisfactory. The rhythm is blurred without the main plot. I always open a copy, it's not about fruit, it's about cooking. Or are they those conspiracy things? 5.. Since we use the courage of the overlord, add various cereal crops, and this dynasty is plagued by natural and man-made disasters, why don't we develop our power and rise up? ? Instead, what is the purpose of adding the courage of the Overlord? Just for the sake of pretending to be 13. Generally speaking, there is no big poison, but I guess the old bookworm has basically been persuaded to quit after more than 100 chapters. The main line is blurred.

I think the writing is quite good, the protagonist is not brainless, and the princess is also well-characterized with flesh and blood. It's not a purely enjoyable article, but it's a bit short. I wish I could write more😊

You also came into this world with others full of love and expectations, so please don't underestimate yourself anymore. Whether you are happy or bad, everything will always be sunny🌸🌸🌸🌸

The rest is okay, but it's too wordy. A poem can last for several chapters, and even a primary school teacher can't explain it clearly to you. It took me so long to write a poem to praise it that I forgot about the poem I was writing until the next sentence.

It was okay in the beginning, but when it came to fighting for the throne, it started to look ugly. Heh, he suddenly decided that he wanted the princess to be the empress. Heh, you see that the princess has the potential to be Wu Zetian. It is better for you to take the position yourself, but you also said that you wanted to be Prince Xiaoyao or something like that. The third prince is obviously powerful, so you have to protect yourself, but suddenly you have to let the princess take the position. Heh, it's a messy plot.

As long as it doesn't suck

There is no key point and a lot of nonsense. Writing a Lantern Festival poem only takes a long time.

It really doesn't work, the protagonist's position is wavering, why should he support the princess? Isn't it just that he has changed his mind and become the emperor? Anyway, the princess listens to the protagonist, and I feel that the protagonist is too stupid because of his poor IQ.

The general concept of the plot is quite good and worth watching. However, there are too many mistakes in the organization and expression of many sentences. I hope the author will pay attention to it.