Wuxia Crossover: A Tavern Keeper Picks Up Wang Yuyan

There are a lot of typos, and even some chapter titles and names are wrong, which seriously affects reading. The first one or two hundred chapters are barely readable, and the following chapters are 💩. The logic is confusing, the setting is contradictory, the number of words is repeated for one thing, and the words are often used inappropriately, just like a primary school student's composition.

Well, how can I put it, the plot in Kyushu was okay at first, but after the system upgrade to the Queen of Heaven, I felt that I couldn't watch it, I couldn't get interested in watching it, it felt very boring and boring... I just felt lonely after watching it😕😕😕😕😕😕

This book is so-so. I thought it was about Demi-Gods and Dragons when I first read it. But after reading more than a hundred chapters, I found out that it is actually a fusion of multiple novels, TV series, etc. People who have not read these things may not understand.

At the beginning, Jin Yong's martial arts was watchable. Whether you like it or not depends on the individual. Later, when Gao Wu joined in, the world view was already chaotic, but the poison could not kill people. In the latter part, "Connecting All Realms" was just illogical and messy. From strength to prop use to plot advancement, it was outrageous.

It's too monotonous to write about drinking! Moreover, the threshold for successful challenge is too low and seems very cheap!

It feels like an emotionless robot handling business at the counter

The writing ideas are relatively new. The three views are acceptable, with slight flaws. But it doesn't feel like it's out of running a running account. As I look at it, I feel it's boring.

After reading Chapter 135, I really can't stand it anymore. In addition to the attractive beginning, it then becomes the same repetitive challenge story telling, endless, and nothing new at all.

What a mess you wrote. When you wrote about Guan Yu, you felt sick and vomited. You wrote that Guan Yu was the one who deserved the disaster. You might as well have written about Xiang Yu and Lu Bu...

It was okay in the early stage, but collapsed in the later stage.