My Family's Supermarket Connects to the Great Song

I can only say that the writing is somewhat good and not uncomfortable to watch, but the plot left me speechless. For example, it was a fire or a malicious arson. He said that he could not escape. His men swam over from the other side of the river, and then they did not want to escape by boat, but released a hot air balloon to escape. Not to mention the fact that the temperature above the fire is higher and more dangerous during the fire, and the hot air balloon needs to be inflated for a long time. You can use it directly after taking it out. Let's just say there are 40 people at the fire scene. Can your hot air balloon sit open...

The subject matter is good, but I don't have enough intelligence to write it with flavor. After reading chapters 30 to 40, I found that the value of many things was not stated in them, such as swords, Tai Sui, mountain products, and wild ginseng. There are also some plots that are really speechless. There are still some complaints that I don't want to say too much. Anyway, the writing is really bad. You write about food through ancient and modern times~~ I am really speechless.

A novel with low IQ. None of the characters appears with high IQ.

Although the plot is fantasy and the language is simple and unpretentious, it is obviously more acceptable than other similar works. It is a book worth reading.

Holy Virgin, others are coming to kill you. If you have a gun, don't use it. All you have to do is run.

To be honest, most Song Dynasty time travels are set in the world of Water Margin. Why don't you write about the world view of Water Margin? If you are writing, you should at least know something about Water Margin, right? Yang Zhi was robbed of the birthday gang, not the Hua Shi Gang. The Hua Shi Gang was sunk by the wind and waves. Don't Lu Zhishen know Lin Chong? Without Lu Zhishen, Lin Chong would have died in the wild boar forest, and Mao Xian would have gone up to Liangshan. In the Water Margin, people generally refer to themselves as brothers, or older brothers. The eldest brother means that he is either highly respected, such as Chao Gai, or he is someone he is not familiar with and is used to say hello. After reading dozens of chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.

There is nothing interesting about the nonsense. The novel is just made up. It is just nonsense and imaginary. It is not true. It is not interesting to watch. This book is written too casually, and I can't read it. I don't know what I want to explain. To write well, you need to have an outline. You need to know where to write, what to express, and what to let readers see. Can't you just rely on guessing?

The plot is quite confusing, and the logic becomes incomprehensible later on. The author lacks common sense. Ancient cultural relics are completely worthless in his mind, and he is also a regional gangster who has a bias against Jiangnan.

A modern man is still being misunderstood everywhere, and he must mess around with problems that can be solved with one shot! The low score makes sense!

Not bad, very interesting