At the Beginning of the Game, He Was Caught in an Act of Rape. the Scholar Came to His Arms Quickly.

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The ability to write and tell stories is good, but I feel that the author has little understanding of ancient culture, and has no common sense about life, making many common sense mistakes. For example, the Qin Dynasty had the nine-nine multiplication table. Of course, the author can make excuses, but if you make excuses for ancient times, ancient times are not only smart, but also time is slow. Many people only study one thing in their lives. It's not just that someone with a high official position can kill someone, not to mention that the heroine is backed by the royal family. As for ordinary people buying a nine-tailed phoenix hairpin, it is even more impossible to open the bedroom door and see two people making out. As for why, please respect that you are writing ancient words and find out for yourself. I only stop here because I didn't read the rest.

The story is okay, but why does it have to be connected with the royal family later in the story? There are also a lot of typos and sentences, it would be better if the author were more careful.

It looks good, but you have to guess to know how many typos there are.