Traveling Through the 70S, Marrying a Rough Guy with Space

I usually don't give bad reviews. This one is really ugly. Just looking at the relationship between the male and female protagonists, there is no sweetness at all. He obviously holds the spiritual spring in his hand but is still indecisive like a brainless person. This article is as cold as an assembly line. The female protagonist's offspring are also brainless. Although she is obviously spoiled and raised, her IQ is not low, but she is like a fool. Such excellent people know how to write about blind dates. When your children are older, there is nothing else to write about you. It's better to just end it directly, and there is also a part in the back where the male protagonist is suffering from cancer. Please, don't you always drink the elixir for your family? You know clearly that the effect is bad, but you are like a headless fly. What do you want to express in this paragraph? There is also the male protagonist who retired with his leg healed inexplicably. How could it be so ruthless? He didn't give him any time to recuperate and kicked him out as soon as he said it. Isn't this dark?

It's beautiful, thank you to the author, come on

It's not good-looking. The heroine's biological parents are professors and have a certain amount of knowledge, but they still can't understand it clearly. There is no need for the heroine to compete with her adopted daughter for favor. Her biological parents know that you have suffered since childhood, and they are not willing to avenge you. They also give money to the adoptive parents, arrange jobs for the adoptive mother and son, and buy a house for the adopted daughter. I am really speechless!

Sometimes the heroine Madonna Not good-looking Very confusing

I have finished reading the whole book and would like to express my thoughts. The theme of the story and the development of the plot are very good. I feel like I have published an outline. Theme: It's pretty good and can be considered inspirational. It's a period story, with the female protagonist developing her career and love as the main plot. The male protagonist should write about relationships. Character design: From the male protagonist, female protagonist to other supporting characters, they are also average, and the portrayal is not very specific. Plot: The plot development is quite good. Writing style: There are a lot of mistakes in you, me, her, etc. There are a lot of mistakes in the names. The plot description is straightforward and has no sense of substitution. It is like sending an outline of the plot development without adding some modifications or some side descriptions. The result is just written and posted directly without polishing.

The ending is very happy

The heroine is not cruel. He treated her badly after selling her and still continued to cut off the relationship. It's not that good. I gave up.

I feel that the heroine is a bit willful. She was not as cautious as she was in the apocalypse at first, and she is not as stable later on.

The sentences don't make sense and it's very tiring to read.

There is a lot of content that I can't quite understand, and there are a lot of typos. What do you understand?