Zongmen Ancestral Hall Signing in for 100 Years

There's a little too much nonsense, the sword sect's strength is too weak, the plot is okay, it's just trying to make up for the word count!

The theme is a bit old and the ideas are average. The main reason is that the writing is not very good, especially the language expression ability is too poor.

Personally, I feel that the protagonist's breakthroughs at each level are unclear, and the timeline is also unclear. The entire novel is just connected by describing stories one by one, and the time in between does not convey the feeling of changes over time. Secondly, I feel that the naming of skills is a bit arbitrary. For example, what is the so-called "Invincible Iron Fist" of the elder of the boxing sect? Even though he was almost defeated by the protagonist, the name of this skill is really interesting... The title of the book about the return timeline is a hundred years, so should every breakthrough he made in the past hundred years and the time spent in it be written in more detail? Even if the protagonist just signs in, I would still like to see the hard work, hard work, difficulties and breakthroughs after encountering bottlenecks. (Ps. I said a bit too much, please don't criticize me if you don't like it, thank you~)

It's so disappointing that it didn't finish well.

So awesome, all the sects are extinct! Still practicing!

It's the eunuch again, so annoying! !