Fantasy: I Can Control the Script of Life

Tepid

In fact, I don't quite understand the protagonist's thoughts. For a time traveler, the so-called sect is just a joke. If this sect is beneficial to you, then develop it. If it doesn't go well with you, then judge the sect, go to other sects and then come back and train the sect like a dog.

The presence of Goldfinger is too low. People are pretending to be good to the protagonist, but the protagonist is deceived. It's outrageous. The protagonist is plotted against, and he feels frustrated that he can't do anything about it. You can obviously check other people's destiny scripts and take chances, but you just play without watching. This intelligence-dampening plot makes you want to kill people.

It's worse. It's not written by chance at all. It's totally different.

It's just very messy, messy, and unclearly written. I don't recommend it.

Why is the protagonist's name different from the introduction?

When I opened this book, my eyes suddenly froze, no, I stared at the few comments below - I knew the opportunity was here! Hot reviews are the coveted hot reviews! When I put my hands on the keyboard in excitement, I suddenly stopped again. So what if I came early? I'm an ordinary little cutie who can't say sexy things or tell jokes. Why should I compete with those horrible devils in the comment section for hot comments? The interesting content in my lost book no longer attracts me, so leaving here is the only way for me to highlight its value and significance! Am I destined to miss the hot reviews?

This author doesn't understand what realm he is writing about. One time he wrote about the realm but there was no breakthrough. Another time he wrote it as Na Yuan 8 realm. Then after using the system to check it, it became Na Yuan 1 realm. After finishing it, it didn't change any luck. He was able to break through one big realm and three small realms to fuck that person named Lin Qian? Why have you changed your destiny and successfully become a child of luck? It's too poisonous to beat others. The author can't understand the protagonist's own realm. The author's realm of this book is like a joke when facing the protagonist. It's nothing like just getting rid of the identity of a handyman and crossing more than a big realm to fuck people. Is this 8.4 Rating really something that a person can give?

The writing is unclear and messy

Not bad