After the Breakup, I Got the System

It's okay, the plot is exciting

If you are engaging in ambiguity everywhere, don't give the male protagonist a so-called "straight man persona" that won't accept or reject him. He still keeps a conceited persona and agrees to any request. The most disgusting part of the novel is pretending to be boyfriend and girlfriend.

Thanks for your hard work.

The pace is too fast

When my car was scratched by a child, I said how cruel it was on the spot, but it ended up being an anticlimax. At a class reunion, you go to a class reunion if you don't know anyone, and then leave after saying a few words... Anyway, I've never seen this kind of thing

The plausibility of the entire book's content is due to the fact that it is a novel! The author can write however he likes. The novel does not need any rationality, as long as it is written, it is just the author's cognition and insight...

I really worked hard to write the first dozen or so chapters, but the rest is a bit of a trick...

Not great.

It's okay, I feel like there's nothing interesting about it

The bad guys who were against the protagonist were all let off lightly, and none of them were killed. Bad review.