After the Breakup, I Got a System

It's okay, the plot is exciting

Thanks for your hard work.

If you are engaging in ambiguity everywhere, don't give the male protagonist a so-called "straight man persona" that won't accept or reject him. He still keeps a conceited persona and agrees to any request. The most disgusting part of the novel is pretending to be boyfriend and girlfriend.

The pace is too fast

When my car was scratched by a child, I said how cruel it was on the spot, but it ended up being an anticlimax. At a class reunion, you go to a class reunion if you don't know anyone, and then leave after saying a few words... Anyway, I've never seen this kind of thing

The plausibility of the entire book's content is due to the fact that it is a novel! The author can write however he likes. The novel does not need any rationality, as long as it is written, it is just the author's cognition and insight...

I really worked hard to write the first dozen or so chapters, but the rest is a bit of a trick...

The bad guys who were against the protagonist were all let off lightly, and none of them were killed. Bad review.

Not great.

What's going on with novels now? Are they so brainless? The three-piece set at the beginning is to break up, win the lottery, and find a girl.