The Forbidden Zone in the Mountain Village: Exposed for Teaching Kids to Catch Ghosts

A little review, after reading it, first of all, my personal rating is 8:5, I can't get 9 points from me. The book is okay, better than average. Let me talk about a few points. First, the protagonist's attributes are undoubtedly the Virgin. From the beginning, the protagonist is positioned as an A-level as soon as he comes out. Although it is not mentioned in the previous article, it will be pointed out later. The other A-levels are big bosses. When you get to the protagonist, you become a der. There are so many edcb people who provoke the protagonist, but the protagonist actually accepts others as apprentices? And the attitude of the person who provoked you was so bad. If in reality, a rich second generation was like this, I would ask someone to give him a shot. Your protagonist is so powerful, and you are not afraid of them as described in the book, so the Holy Mother is engraved in your bones. Second, logic, some places are illogical. There are many, many. For example, three people found your hometown, but one of them went in and one was beaten to death by a child. There should be one left, so you didn't describe it? Just default to the fact that the third one does not exist? Another example is realm. Once the protagonist reaches the realm, he is indeed invincible, but what about the other people you teach? It's okay to fight against people of the same level, but it's different from enemies of the same level. The enemy can fight a bunch of people weaker than you, but how many can you teach only to fight? Can't even beat it? Another example. . . No, it's just a lot of logical problems anyway. Third, it's the ending. It's very sloppy. It seems to be the end of the story, but it turns out to be an unfinished story. And for the rest, fellow Taoists, you can see for yourself. Why can I give it an 8.5 Personally? Because I've finished reading it. Ah, you have to have a good attitude towards the novels you have finished. A review is a review, and a rating is a rating. In short, it is just average, not bad, not bad. Recommendation index, three stars. You can read it. Skip and read "The Holy Mother". If you read it without thinking, you can still finish it.

It's actually pretty good-looking and interesting to write, but the ending is a bit sloppy...

Poison spots make up a book

The female anchor is still so brainless at the beginning, the main character is the Virgin. It's all poison.

Chapter 129 seemed okay before, but then it became confusing, and there are still various holes that have not been filled.

In the early stages of the book, I had the desire to read it, but it ended too quickly and I was a bit unresponsive.

There are so many typos and bad sentences!

It was okay in the early stage, but in the later stage...