The Heroine Hears My Thoughts, and My Villain Persona Falls Apart

The author's character design of the protagonist in this book is still okay. The plot and humor of the book are okay. The only shortcoming of this book is that the ending suddenly ends on a cliff. It gives people the feeling that this novel with more than a thousand chapters suddenly comes to an end. I hope the author can publish a second part. The story structure can be larger and each character, no matter good or bad, can be more delicate.

It's really good, not too many words. Although the ending is rushed, it doesn't matter. After all, if the heroine appears too much, everyone's role will be reduced. Many harem novels have too many female protagonists to match by the middle stage. But there are two points: first, the heroine who appeared next to Yang Luo at the beginning came out and made a phone call before disappearing. By the end of the book, it was not revealed who it was. Second, can there be a prequel that tells the story of his failure to clear the level for the first time?

Very good urban writing, very beautiful.

The first half can be regarded as a passable novel with many flaws, but the latter part can be said to be a piece of shit. Fortunately, the author is not too ignorant, so he only rated it as average for the sake of finishing the book. After all, there are all kinds of sudden intellectual changes, book-eating, and some plots are even disgusting. This disgusting person does not mean that the plot is extreme, but that the plot development and character creation create a huge sense of disconnection and unreasonableness, making it difficult to read. Especially this is an urban novel, which needs a certain degree of authenticity, otherwise the fun will be greatly reduced. I suggest the author accumulate more social experience, stop writing urban novels, and write some fantasy and immortality, at least it will not be so bad.

I quit when I saw Chapter 160. It's interesting at the front, but it starts to get watery at the back. It seems that this kind of novel is like this. Isn't it difficult to write later? The word count is just low?

There is no awareness of lightning protection at all. The things about the heroine and the hero in the previous life are too disturbing to write down. I think others have written stories where the protagonist was a eunuch in his previous life, which is good.

The content is good, but the ending is too rushed

I can only say that the author has become a real bastard after being a bastard for a long time. What a soft-hearted protagonist who thinks about giving away his daughter all day long.

It was pretty good, but the later part of the meeting was a bit awkward and the ending was a bit rushed. The protagonist's outlook on life is very upright, and it's not a mindless killing of a stallion. Whether a novel is good or not has a lot to do with whether the protagonist's three views match your own.

I think we can add a little after story. Look at the harem on fire. The later storyline also shrinks a bit quickly. But it still counts as filling all the holes dug. Fortunately, the tail was not docked directly.