The First Arms Dealer in the Tang Dynasty

When describing a historical story, just one point is enough, and it still takes up a few pages. Just take a 6. If you don't write about the old people and children of the Turkic tribe, you don't have to describe them. You still have to explain, haven't you heard that Ci does not command troops? Moreover, those foreign ethnic groups are not the current ethnic groups. They are all mixed-blooded. Most of them were exterminated or merged to become what they are now. Then came the emotional scenes. After meeting Chang Le, he said how much he liked him. If he wanted to be a consort, he told Li Shimin that if he had good things, he would give them to some of his father-in-laws. He was very stingy, and he was not stingy with outsiders, giving as much as he wanted. It's like a bottomless pit. You are really six. Also, are you writing a single female lead or multiple female leads? If you have weakened your feelings for Chang Le, you don't have to do it. There are more than 200 pictures, and the female supporting role has more scenes than Chang Le. It's really ridiculous. He said before that he would not do anything to disgrace Chang Le, and then the plot tried every means to involve the female partner, especially the sworn brother. He said before that he would find a wife for his brother. Can't he help you? Then you fucked her and left her to your brother. You said you were cheap or not, and you had a great time with her! I really don't want to talk about this thing. When I went to another city, the role of the tough girl was gone, but I kept hanging on to him. If I didn't like it, I refused. I also wrote that I was worried that the emperor would owe a romantic debt if he saw you flirting with his daughter. Tsk tsk, you are still a virgin girl. If you catch a Turkic princess and don't turn it in, your fiefdom is so big, why do you want to lose your family and eat and drink around? Also, Aunt Gongsun and his father didn't arrange any work for him! And what you are writing here is that any woman can enter the house, right? You haven't seen a woman in how many years, and the description of the situation of the protagonist and his adopted brother is writing about yourself, right?

I persisted until I read more than 120 chapters and gave up decisively. Not only are there too many typos and wrong sentences, but the whole paragraph is copied and pasted to make up the word count, ignoring the facts, talking nonsense, and contradicting itself. To list them would be like writing the book all over again. It is better to accumulate some Chinese studies first, expand the knowledge system, and accumulate a lot before writing a book.

Too ↑ Heady ⊙∀⊙?

Well, it's obviously a time-travel novel, but it has to be constantly compared with history. The more I watch, the more boring I get!

The author is a brainless person. His IQ is not up to par. He has completely reduced his intelligence. I have read Chapter 11. I am really sorry. I want to curse.

Very novel

The basic common sense is all wrong. At first glance, it seems that I have no energy and only rely on my poor brain capacity to make assumptions. The so-called exchange prices are all messed up, the same thing has a different price for a while. No basic knowledge about weapons The description of the characters is even more indescribable, they are all abnormal human beings with no brains. Anyway. You can't read this book with your brain in mind, I can't stand it if I think too much about it By the way, there are a lot of typos, which is terrible.

What are you writing about? The plot isn't enough history to make up for it? Every one? Interesting?

What a mess. I'm afraid you read a few similar novels and copied them over. You just read a few novels, and the Wang family was wiped out so easily? Is it a big deal to kill a group of city defense troops? He really thinks he is a god. If time travel were like this, he would have died 800 times earlier. Do you really think that ancient people are fools?

I have always loved reading about time travel, and you can learn about history from it, but this novel is a little weird.