A Couch Potato Transmigrates into the Cannon-Fodder Fiancée of a Male-Focused Novel’s Hero

In fact, the character design is okay... After reading it, I felt deceived. The writing was very messy and awkward, and I felt that many things were not explained clearly. The last line was originally short and perfunctory, and the ending returned to modern times with Fu getting married... Why bother writing two male protagonists? Xiao Lu is even more pitiful.

I saw things getting worse and worse later on, and then I found out that the heroine actually likes snake essence disease? What he did was really unjust. I feel sorry for Xiao Lu, he is obviously more affectionate and pays more attention to the heroine

The writing was very messy. Sometimes I felt sorry for this male protagonist, and sometimes I felt sorry for that one. I couldn't help feeling sad at all, so I decisively abandoned the article.

I don't like watching this kind of forced love. The male protagonist is crazy and criticizes her for doing whatever he wants regardless of whether others accept the love or not. The rest of the audience can't understand the human language at all. The female protagonist is like explaining to a group of deaf people... The female protagonist knows the plot because of time travel, even though the male protagonist Lu Ze is not as passionate about the female protagonist as in the play. Or is she rejected by the female protagonist and accepts Fu Qingye, a more perverted male protagonist? Does the female protagonist have masochistic tendencies? Later, the female protagonist accepted the male protagonist Lu Ze because of the system task... This so-called double male protagonist really received a bad review, and it made my brain burn so many brain cells...

It also creates two worlds. The two worlds and the two plots are switched back and forth, which makes it a bit confusing. If you really can't finish writing, you can just make a hundred chapters...

It's broken. Why does the storyline end with marrying Fu?

Personally, I feel like I just wrote two endings! So two male protagonists. I don't know if the ending would have been different if I had chosen different choices.

The writing is quite good, and the male protagonist is also very handsome. But starting from the back line, it feels a bit confusing. At the beginning, it was written about Ze and the heroine in the world of cultivating immortals. Later, he returned to modern times. After returning to modern times, he married Fu. It felt like there was no clear explanation.

Did you arrange the dual male protagonists like this? I was immediately confused. Without reading the comment section, I thought Fu and Lu were just following the plot. What was this?

The author's homepage said that the characters were Xi Luo and Lu Ze, but in the end the heroine and Fu were together. I was really shocked. Lu Ze had many women in his previous life, so it was normal for the heroine not to choose him. But I really can't figure it out. Fu is a straight man, and he took pleasure in teasing the heroine at the beginning, so why did he suddenly fall in love with her?