Quick Travel: the Host Is a Max-Level Boss

One of the few novels that have not received positive reviews. I have finished reading the first three worlds so far. Let me summarize my feelings. 1. The heroine is a bit like a moon village Please don't read Jie Dang. The heroine was kissed by Qin Chuan in the first world. The heroine was almost "bullied" by the World Athletics Association in the second world. When she was about to graduate, she was kidnapped because of Ms. Ming's surgery. When she went to the local government, some gangsters came to "bully" her because of Song. In the third world, she was kissed by Qin Junhe, and her clothes were torn off, leaving only a piece of cloth covering them. It was no different from watching. She almost lost her virginity, and the hero came to save her every time. I want to ask the author, does he hate the heroine so much? 2. I feel like the heroine is brainless and can't match her level. It was still the second world. The heroine was drugged when she was tied into the car. Logically speaking, she should have a long memory after suffering a loss. However, in the third world, she failed again. She knew that Qin Junhe had bad intentions and was not prepared. Bang! I'm in Chinese medicine again. Every time I'm "bullied", the male protagonist has to come to save me. I cry when I see the male protagonist. The female protagonist also has a lot of points. Every time I almost lose my virginity before telling the system to use Drunk, Life, Dream, Death. Is there a cat cake? Why did I go there earlier? Do I have to wait for myself to be taken advantage of before I give up? 3. Introducing characters into the small world In the article, you can often see sentences such as "face pale", "head lowered and shaking all over" and "like a deep ice cellar, freezing to death". You told me this is because it cannot violate the character. OK, I understand, but it cannot be too outrageous! 4. The heroine is too weak The systematic heroine is always beaten, by the track and field charity, by her parents, and by Qin Junhe again! You said you can't do this to maintain your personality. If you are beaten by a parent, you can not fight back for the sake of your personality. You can't even hide. Isn't that a cake? Isn't this spending points to buy happiness? Isn't it normal for a woman to almost lose her virginity if she doesn't move? Isn't it normal for a woman to burst out her huge potential when she is desperate? In addition to crying here, she expresses her inner despair and fear. She always tries to make sure that she can't destroy her character and don't want to be discovered as an outsider. She is speechless and feels suffocated. Summary: The heroine Yuezhuang is weak, can fall into a trap several times, etc.

It's super good-looking, but for some reason, I always feel that the first few small worlds are much prettier than the last few, and the image of the heroine has changed from the beginning to the end, as if she wasn't written by the same person!

The plot of the story is quite exciting, but there are a lot of typos at the end, and people's names are often written wrong. The author is very considerate and has written two endings, so that readers with different hobbies can choose the ending they like. We look forward to more and better works from the author.

In the first world, the plot at the beginning seems like the male protagonist is unclean, and the plot is a bit inconsistent with the rest. In the second world, according to the original plot, Qin Yan and the original female protagonist should be locked up, and the original male protagonist is better. . .

The main reason is that I was interested in it at the beginning and it looked good, but I lost interest in the later part and the writing was okay.

There are a lot of typos, and it has nothing to do with the full-level boss in the title of the book. At the end, I still prefer be. Although M is dead, but because of that lie, WHY will continue to live, won't he? He will be very happy. V Waiting for M in every world, looking for M 2825.7.22 17.17 End

I originally thought it was good, but when I saw the master's plane, I was nauseated. The male protagonist used the female protagonist in his previous life. After the female protagonist died, he ascended. After becoming a god, he recalled that the female protagonist was the only master who was good to him in his life. . . This is okay, it's really disgusting

It was okay in the early stages, but the female protagonist became even weaker in the later stages. It all relied on the male protagonist, not the strong female protagonist.

Many times I feel that my three views are inconsistent. I only see two worlds, and I don't understand or understand them. What I can't understand the most is that in the master's plane, the male protagonist has such a bad character that he is worthy of being the darling of the plane? Doesn't this broken plane need to be repaired? Can you come up with a good character design? Such an arrogant, selfish, conceited, unsentimental person, and rape him if he can't get it? I can't say that the male protagonist is perfect, but at least he must have advantages. I was so sick that I vomited, but you could still write it as he in the end. Tell me why this male protagonist became a god, why he could reverse time, and why he got what he wanted.

It's really good to watch, Super Invincible. It has a very complete story line. The plot is also very attractive and eye-catching. It is thoughtful and has two endings, HE and BE, to meet the needs of different people. However, there are a lot of homonymous typos, basically two or three in each chapter, which affects the reading experience. It would be great if it can be corrected! Although the current version is also very good [crying] Chapter 300 is too short and not enough to read, oh wow