Joy in the Palm of My Hand

The male protagonist is a bit wild, I like it hahaha

The front is good-looking and exciting, but the further you get to the back, the date becomes unsightly and unfinished.

It's ambiguous. The first half is okay, but the second half is all about the hospital (sickness, etc.), Which makes the readers less interested in reading. Some aspects of the plot are not closely connected and are very vague (even skipped without an answer). The ending reverses too quickly and there is no expectation (it feels like it's all a routine).

If he looks good, the male lead is really my favorite

Misunderstandings come and go, and lies come and go. A few people don't tell the truth and have no brains. The first half is still readable, but the second half is a mess. Didn't the Gu family say they want to take the heroine to meet someone? I feel like they didn't write about their life experience.

The author's writing style is okay, and the story narration is not sluggish, but the plot design is too lame. I hesitated again and again, but in order to encourage the author, I gave it a good look. I don't know how much the author knows about the duties of a bridesmaid. All the feelings the heroine encounters as a bridesmaid are superfluous. The bridesmaid cannot leave the bride and groom from the wedding day until the end of the wedding. Therefore, there is no chance for others to make a big fuss during the wedding. Everyone else can tell that the little meat bun looks like the male protagonist, except that the male and female protagonists are blind and have doubts. The old man can immediately go for a paternity test, but the male protagonist is dumbfounded so that the story can continue. Because I sometimes listen to books, I don't understand what happened when the male protagonist in Suzhou saved the female protagonist from being injured? I just remember that the heroine was in the hospital preparing to go through the discharge procedures, and the hero was sent there, and then the hospital was strictly prohibited from entering or exiting. The male protagonist is kidnapped, and the female protagonist goes to save it. The rest of the plot can only be said to be mutual rescue. Can anyone understand it and explain it to me, because I really don't want to repeat it. The heroine and her best friend Lan Lan had an encounter five years ago... And then Shen Mo, who had risked his life for the heroine, was suddenly willing to accept Lan Lan, which was a bit unexpected. I hope the author can produce more mature works through this practical experience.

What I wrote in the early stage is really good! I came here for the sweet pet label. I love it so much, the plot is funny and sweet. In the later stages, it was really hard to explain, and it was a story about amnesia. Alas, anyway, there was less of a story about chasing the wife in the later stages, and there were still a lot of misunderstandings. If it hadn't been for the old man, the truth might never have come out. I still prefer the male protagonist to find out the truth on his own. The ending is quite hasty

The beginning is okay, but the subsequent plot becomes more and more procrastinating, very procrastinating.

It's good to watch, the plot is interesting, and the male protagonist is also interesting.

I don't understand how this score came about? The characters are a mess, and the plot becomes all kinds of weird later on.