The Book of Ashes

The first point is that the secondary characters are described too little and have no shining points, making them difficult to remember. The second point is that I personally don't like the foreign name used and it feels a bit confusing. The third point is that the plot is bland and there is no climax in half the chapter, so there is no expectation. At first glance, it feels like "Lord of the Weird", but there is no climax to attract readers. The combination of the first and second points will make me unable to remember who and what identity the characters mentioned later are (you may say that I am not careful, but for the characters who do not shine, I treat them as passers-by and will not re-remember them) The author will issue a separate chapter of notes every few chapters to explain some content, or follow the