I Keep Myself Alive Through Studying

Favorite main line But sometimes the jump is too fast and I can't keep up with the changes. In addition, I feel a little anxious to end it.

I read every page carefully in the early stage, and then I skipped through the middle and later stages to the end. The ending was so sloppy that I was surprised, it felt like it started but ended. The beginning is still a bit interesting, but the past life memory part in the middle was also a bit confusing for me (I feel like it would be better to write it in another way (non-professional suggestion)). The plot develops for a long time, and by the end many things are summarized in such a hasty manner, which makes people uncomfortable.

Moreover, Dad Yun was really a loser in the later stage, but everything else was fine.

To be honest, the ending was a bit hasty, and there are still a lot of holes that have not been filled in. Although everyone's life experience is almost known, it has not been announced. Neither his parents know about Zhiqing. There is no follow-up of Zhiyu and Jiang Shaochuan. From the clip, it is only known that they got married, and his brother's feelings for her ended hastily in just two sentences. There is no wedding of the protagonist, and the life after marriage is only the few sentences mentioned in the early stage.

It's just that the ending is too hasty and the plot

The frame is a bit stretched, and memories always pop up in the middle, making it confusing to watch. Moreover, there is a sloppy ending at the end, and many things are not finished yet. It is really annoying.

I feel like the writing was pretty good, but the ending seemed a bit too sloppy. What about the rest?

I want to watch the post-marriage extras.

1 The plot jumps too fast, making it very blurry and tiring to watch, and the relationship between the characters is too complicated. 2 Even the feeling that a person appears directly without any introduction has a certain weight, and the relationship between the characters is not clearly written. 3 The ending was too hasty, and no holes were filled. In the end, everyone knew the heroine's life experience, and it felt like the heroine didn't know. This was not realistic at all. Not to mention that the heroine's grandfather left a letter in her piano, which made the heroine suspicious. Many people even showed up to see the heroine and asked her if her mother's surname was the first clue. The heroine is set to be a person with a high IQ, so it is impossible not to know. 4. The relationship between the heroine and the hero is also outrageous. In the early stage, the hero has been taking the heroine as his task, and even wanted to hypnotize the heroine to get her secrets. But suddenly he feels that he likes the heroine. Even if he is attracted by the heroine's shining point, it cannot be sudden. . . 5. Near the end, the heroine and hero must be given identities that may be the system developer, Dr., And her lover. But it feels like the sudden identity has no source or even a reasonable explanation. 6 I can only say that the author can actually continue to write the story slowly rather than have a hasty ending. In this way, these shortcomings can be made up for, harm! !

I'm not a person who writes reviews, but this book is very interesting and full of talent and hard work. In fact, I have a lot of questions. There are many holes that have not been filled in. Is it full of doctors? Will the doctors wake up after the happiness fragments are filled? Are Si Nian and Man Man's children the next Children of Luck, and what will happen to his story? Is Si Nian also from the interstellar world? There are so many pitfalls, it's so big TT I'm crying woooooooo XX