Great Qin Cavalry

It's pretty ok, a little messy in the middle, but overall it's ok

There are a lot of typos, even basic sentences are not fluent, and the reading experience is extremely poor.

Don't always confuse Hulkan and Hulzan

It's so confusing, both the plot and the characters are hard to watch, everyone has no characteristics, and the main character is just awesome.

The outline idea is good, but the writing is too poor.

Discourage! What the hell

, The plot is more exciting, the sentences are fluent, there are many typos, and the name is Juan!

I'm convinced. There are characters from every dynasty. Did you write about cultivation?

Alas, alas, already. ,, This book is so damn good!

Is there a female protagonist?