I Became the World's Boss for My Sister

The writing is average. But, don't know why? Is it because the subject matter is novel or because I haven't read any similar novels before, so I am attracted to read it.

Watched half of it. The early writing is good, the subject matter is new, the pace is fast, and it doesn't drag on. Very comfortable to watch. But after saving my sister, the author's writing began to become chaotic. There was no outline and he just wrote whatever came to his mind. Either a running account or a series of fighting parts. With more than 270 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I started reading it, and after reading it, there were 344 emotional changes. It feels like it's over and I can't stand it anymore. After rescuing my sister, the progress of the world plot line in the next 200 chapters was ridiculously slow. It was like the kind where everyone except the protagonist was Teletubbies. Later, the author found that the writing collapsed and started to advance quickly. In the article, the combat power collapses, don't think too much, just act randomly. The current storyline mainly progresses through a disgusting organization written by an author. The writing is so outrageous and brainless that there is nothing to say, and the perception plummets. In the middle, the author just writes whatever comes to mind, without any logical outline. Come on, author, I hope the next book will have a clearer outline and stop writing disgusting and brainless organizations to confuse the audience.

The writing in the middle is pretty good. The ending feels a little unfinished, I hope the next book will be better!!!! \\\\٩( 'ω' )و ////

Pure white text, written by primary school students, no-brainer monster fighting upgrades, the protagonist and supporting characters are a bit intellectual, it is obviously a world with strong personal power, the opponent is going to kill you, but the protagonist is like a holy mother, just beat him down, or twice

The middle is okay, but the beginning and end are not good, and the end is unfinished.

It sucks, it's a forced ending.

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Although I felt that the book ended a bit suddenly and the second half was a bit confusing, the subject matter was still quite novel and successfully attracted me to read the entire book. In short: give a good review February 20, 2024 9:01 am

The author's writing style is great, but it's really hard to criticize the sister who turned into a heroine. I regretted saying it was good and decisively abandoned the book (ᇂ_ᇂ|||)

It's really a crappy thing. Just look at the title and you can follow the plot even by skipping dozens of chapters.