The Dark-Bellied General's Pastoral Girl

The part towards the end was too confusing, what the ending, nothing was explained clearly, and why the Murong family lived in seclusion. Grandma said she would tell her later, but she didn't say anything until the end. There were so many typos that it was a mess. It felt good to give an average rating. Thank you for the hard work of the author.

The ending was a big mess, and many details were not dealt with properly, including the marital status of several brothers from the Murong family and the Xuanyuan family, as well as the final whereabouts of Murong Baozhu... Among the hundreds of books I have read so far, this one has the most typos, the worst, and the most confusing ones📖. Sometimes I have to rely on guesswork...

Looks a bit nonsensical

I gave up the article after only reading about twenty chapters. I don't like the author's writing techniques and writing style very much. I feel that the author's description of the atmosphere is not good enough. Moreover, in the process of narration, it is also lacking in power. Obviously, the narration would be complete if I just mention some important parts, but in the end, this is missing. Partly, I don't really like the author's writing technique. Secondly, the names in the article are often wrong, there are more typos, and the sentences are unclear, so the article is even less immersive when I read it. I hope the author can improve his writing skills and write more and better articles.

Recommend everyone to take a look

It's nice to read and listen to, but it's a bit confusing in the later chapters, with many of them repeating the previous chapters.

Forced halo, annoying heroine

Hey, I've watched too much, and I've become black.