The Little Fierce Concubine from the Farm Family: Taking the Whole Family to Make a Living

The part before episode 700 feels that the plot is very exciting, and the writing is also lively and interesting, and it also reflects the characteristics of refreshing writing. The heroine's character is at least very enjoyable to watch, and the plot in the article is also rich and colorful. However, the author has some places where the preface and the follow-up are not matched. Gu Meiduo has already been introduced to teach the teacher how to weave Chinese knots with bamboo. As a result, Later, after arriving in the capital, I started talking about the Chinese knot again, but it didn't match up with the previous article. There were also several such problems later. Moreover, I felt that the author's arrangement of time was not reasonable. But then when I added the story of Yu Kean, I felt that there was no distinction between priorities. I couldn't tell which one was the heroine and which one was the supporting role, and Yu Kean An's part was also introduced in great detail, and some unrelated things were also described in too much detail. I deleted many chapters later, and it felt like a book was being read wonderfully, but suddenly a new story appeared. I felt that this arrangement was not reasonable, and Yu Ke'an went to the Fantasy Continent to refine alchemy and Qi. These contents are a bit overdone. It feels more reasonable to put these things in the extra chapter. In addition, the author's positioning for Gangdou is a bit big, and it feels a bit inconsistent with the content of the article. After all, it is about ordinary people's affairs, and there is nothing too fantasy. I still like the author's writing style. I hope the author will have more and better works.

Highly recommend this cool article! A decisive and capable time traveler, the writing is clean and neat, the lines are clear and coherent, and the plot is compact and gripping. You can't put it down. Big cheers for the author!

The heroine is really mean! ! ! After reading Chapter 112, I couldn't stand it anymore. The old man knew that the heroine's grandmother wanted to sell the heroine's brother several times, and beat and scolded the heroine's family. However, for the sake of his eldest grandson and youngest son, he let his old wife go, and in order to tie up the only four-bedroom family who could work hard, he would rather burn their family to death than separate the family. Finally broke off the relationship. As a result, after more than 100 chapters, he started calling me grandpa, and even had to make new clothes for grandpa... It was so mean! ! !

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Too many flaws! I can't complain┐('～`;)┌The heroine is too holy, I can't stand it anymore, and there are so many unreasonable things in the story, so I gave up!

It was said to be about farming, but it turned out to be about cultivating immortality. Within a few days after traveling through time, he collected thousands of taels of silver from the male protagonist, and then sold ginseng and bears. During this period, he also explored a secret cave and all the gold and silver treasures were plundered by the female protagonist. I read Chapter 21 and there is nothing I want to read.

Very nice…

The plot is relatively coherent and logical from the beginning to more than 200 chapters. The plot after 300 chapters is very confusing and does not match up with the previous ones. It does not feel like it was written by one person. After reading the 700 chapters patiently, it seems like it was written by several people and pieced together. The tasks and characters in it are inconsistent and change at will. I feel that the author is a bit perverted.

Of the two heroines, the first time-travel one is pretty cool. There's just a lot of pinyin. My second agent is a bit weak. What follows is fantasy.

Two female protagonists in one book, completely speechless