The First King of Soldiers

There are two things I like about this book: First, a book about two people for a lifetime Secondly, the emotional line of this book is very well written. It can be seen that the protagonist himself attaches great importance to emotions and controls people's hearts very well. And the ending is quite perfect... But regarding the woman Lin Yunnan, the author's writing was a bit hook... This woman didn't make people feel very good, and she was a bit nauseating. As a result, the author also wrote that the protagonist liked her and said bad things about her? Or do you like her bullying the heroine? Although there is a misunderstanding, it is wrong to insult and bully people without asking the question. Another point is that in some places the author has made up the word count a bit... Overall it's okay,

Some people can make calls on the author's cell phone, but some people cannot. The more important people can only send messages but cannot make calls. This author is the worst writer among all writers. The article is illogical and nonsense. Bad review!

It's pretty! Climax after another

After reading novels for so many years, I changed the ones that were not good and continued with those that I could finish. For the first time, I couldn't help but write a book review. What the hell, I couldn't bear to read half of it. It was too talkative and the plot was confusing. Well, now I feel like typing is a waste of time. It's weird that the author will read the review.

What kind of bad book has so many good reviews? As a king of soldiers and a king of wolf fangs, when his girlfriend was decapitated, he just broke the legs of the evil boy. What is the so-called decisive killing? What about Wrath of the Wolf Fang? I can't stand it anymore, it's so poorly written.

It's still possible! ! !

For justice and protection in dreams

After Chapter 900, the writing was so rubbish, I felt like the author had changed, and I didn't even know what I was writing. In the previous chapter, Dong Sheng's paralysis in his legs was cured by Yu Feng's formula, and he also gave Yang Jian a prescription. Why did Cheng Chi Qianyan cure Yang Jian later, but Yu Feng couldn't cure it? , It's obvious that the author's writing skills are not the same in the later period, and there is too much nonsense. There is so much nonsense during the battle, and you can stop and chatter during the battle. It's so funny, so it's a failure after 900 chapters. It's better to clean up the four major families in more than 900 chapters and finish it.

I can't stand it any longer, and my writing becomes more and more confusing, illogical and unreasonable. I've read so many books, but your writing is ugly. Really, nothing makes sense. You write here and there, and then... Write it yourself. Do you think the plot is reasonable? Forget it, lazy nonsense, it just sucks and I can't stand it anymore

That's not true! Describe the King of Soldiers as a weak chicken!