Job Transfer for All: the Supreme Dharma God Starts at the Beginning, and the School Beauty Begs to Be Taken Away!

I feel like your word count is a bit serious.

There are too many dialogues between passersby A, B, B, and D, the protagonist has too much inner drama, and there are too many narrations.

There's a little water in the back

There are too many inner dramas, and there are also many dramas about the people next to me. The dialogue dramas are from this book. 0.10% Of the others are other people's envy, shock, and admiration essays, jealousy essays, inner essays, and skill introduction essays. I don't even know what novel I read.

1. To be honest, it's quite outrageous. Let's talk about the title of the book first. It does involve a school beauty, but friends who are looking forward to some development in the romantic drama can be advised not to leave it here because it's unfinished. 2. Besides, all battles are a routine. In the Shura difficulty dungeon, ten people are recruited. The teammates don't believe in the protagonist's strength. Then the protagonist shouts 666 all the way. But I think you wrote it well. Are these more than 100 chapters just for the word count or something? You contradict yourself every day. At the beginning, you said you want to speed up the dungeon, but after entering the dungeon, you let your teammates fight. When your teammates are disabled, you lose a healer to show your strength. Without saying a word, I just wanted to know if the protagonist was taken away. Such a speechless operation, and Bai Yang, the ex in the last team, yelled and couldn't beat her when she entered the team. He threatened and taunted the protagonist, and then ran to fight monsters. In the end, it was the protagonist who relied on him. As a result, this person pretended to be a bad guy every day and caused trouble. He used the protagonist's name to sign autographs for others every day. After the protagonist knew about it, he was actually willing to take her with him. 3. I didn't see many interesting plots in this book except for seconds. There was no strength development, no friendship and not even a formal girlfriend. I didn't know what to do except play the book. As a result, the equipment was so powerful and the attributes were so awesome. It's true that the book in Eye of the Void was stuck for so long ex. 4. The highest level is the mythical Shura version. The Super God Shura version is unfinished even if it is not finished. 5. The attribute panel randomly writes level 90. After breaking through the demigod from the holy realm, the experience overflowed to level 95. As a result, after breaking through the demi-god, it changed to level 90. Is it true that 666 is a reverse upgrade? 6. All in all, the beginning is good, the middle is average, and the end is bad.

It's so well written that I have no idea what I'm writing about.

The first point is that there are too many typos. Basically, there are 1 to 3 typos in each chapter. In many places, the sentences are not fluent. You can even get the name of the protagonist wrong. And it is not one or two chapters, but several chapters in a row, sometimes Gu Feng, sometimes Ye Yang, and even Gu Yeyang! The second point is that the plot is too bad and there are too many narrations and scenes. 95% To 99% of this book are articles introducing skills, equipment, monsters, shock, jealousy, inner feelings, envy, admiration and narration! The third point is that he is really good at it. Things that can be written in two or three chapters are written from ten to twenty or thirty chapters! The fourth point is that some things are completely wrong. Not to mention anything else, just on the purchase price, you also said that the higher the level, the more difficult it is to advance. When you reach the five-star silver level, there is only a 10% success rate, and the success rate after that will only be lower. This is also the reason for the five-star rating. The lower the star level, the lower the chance of success. Others need to spend months or even years just to advance to the heroic level and epic level. At that time, the success rate should be only a few tenths or even a few tenths, let alone the legendary level. Forget about the protagonist, why are those girls so accurate as soon as they are promoted? Moreover, they cannot be five-star templates, two or three stars are about the same, and at most four-star templates. But in this case, the success rate of promotion will be reduced again, and they have no success rate at all. The so-called success rate of promotion is completely like a decoration in front of them! After reading this book, I can only say that there are too many contradictions and mistakes. The plot is so bad and so special that I don't even know. What am I reading?

It's a complete novice, I don't remember the setting at all, it's just mindless and fun.

You can go to the factory now

Just feel good and that's it