After Our Arranged Marriage, My Icy Husband Became Addicted to Clinging to Me

Just like that, the story is a bit not very comprehensive. The biggest time bomb, Ye Qingyan's line, did not have an ending at the end. Also, Lu Zhiyi was "killed" by Ye Qingyan, which was not clearly stated in the end. There are also the brother-sister lines between the male protagonist and Ye Qingyan, and the lines between Li Xiaohan and Yan Xue, which are not very complete. There are also the heroine's parents, and finally Lu Zhiyi and the school beauty girlfriend, etc.

First of all, there is a big logical loophole. Since Shen Xi and Shen Xinmeng are biological sisters, how did they switch the children when they gave birth to Shen Zhixing? Children grow up very fast. Can't anyone tell that they are different in age? Of course, I tolerated all the nonsense in Ba Zong's novel. Secondly, there were so many typos, and the words "", "" and "" were used indiscriminately because they were completely unclear. I Remember, didn't you learn this in elementary school? In addition, it also breaks sentences randomly and uses excessive colloquialisms. It would look out of place in a novel about a wealthy boss. For example, "I will tell you" and the like. Normally, you don't usually use "I tell you" or Or "I'm telling you", is the author from Shaanxi? I feel that he brought his own oral habits into the novel. Besides, Ba Zong's novel is about the upper class. Furthermore, why do the male and female protagonists always misunderstand each other? Don't you find it troublesome? But If you open your mouth a little, as for this, there are many inexplicable things that do not need to be explained in detail here. For example, the strawberry and cherry milk tea that Li Jiaojiao asked Aunt Zhong to make. Just say that you just need to take two sips and then stop drinking. It is very consistent with Li Jiaojiao. What a pampered character. Why do you have to explain that these three things are very high in calories, so I only drank two sips to stay in shape? Come on, this is a novel, and the characters are all imagined by the readers. Why on earth should I write this in inexplicable detail? . And their mother Xu Yuerong, I understand that you can't talk about changing children, so at least don't let your other child be bullied. Shen Xi is also your biological child, isn't it? Why should she be bullied by Shen Xinmeng all the time, and let her endure it all the time. How frustrated must the child be? I understand that you miss Shen Xinmeng, but she has at least been pampered for twenty years, right? Why do you just watch her bullying your other child? Forget it, why should I keep asking another child to tolerate it? In short, the plot line is very messy, the character line is also messy, the writing style is not good, and the overall impression is very poor. I have read many novels of this type, just for fun, anyway, they are just for entertainment. This one is really a bit too weird. Every time I turn the page, I have to give in. I never write reviews of novels. I usually give positive reviews directly. I really can't stand this anymore.