After Rejecting the School Belle's Confession 99 Times, I Became the Richest Man in the World

I suggest the author publish a second part, otherwise your undead army will be useless (˵¯͒¯͒˵) I also hope that the author can have a prosperous career like the protagonist in the book. I will be your strong backing (＾ｖ＾)

The ending was too watery, and it was over before I could react.

I can't bear it anymore! Anyone who can click on it and not comment for 30 minutes is a genius! Many readers today live a fast-paced life and are under great pressure from work and study. They read novels to relax and read without thinking, which is quite entertaining. When will authors be able to write articles without thinking? I didn't expect it to score 9.4 Points. 1. The plot is okay. Compared with the poor content, the overall framework is quite satisfactory. At least there are no inconsistencies and conflicts that affect the plot. This is better than 30% of online articles. 2. The writing is poor, with a running account, the climax part and the exciting part without any psychological description, even the parts like Shura Field that should be funny and humorous are as dull as water. 3. The character creation is like applying a template, without any distinctive features. What's the point of formulaic characters? Even the male protagonist Tang San, who is a very bad writer like Douluo, can still be written as a hypocrite for readers to remember. 4. I seriously doubt whether the author has work experience and life experience. The live broadcast company is in danger, and the talented author will plan the layout and develop the plot from the perspective of management, and it will be exciting one after another; the smart author will choose to describe the conflict in the business war, and use vague words to show the wise vision of the male protagonist; the conservative author will choose to promote talents to win people's hearts and skillfully resolve the crisis. And this novel has 5 million fans in one live broadcast, and the overwhelming gifts can solve a company's crisis. When I read it, I called it nb, and I couldn't figure out the author's thoughts. 5. There are also figures such as 95% of the shares, 2 billion, 500,000, etc. That come out of the mouth, which fully reflects the author's imagination and logical confusion. Originally, as a system writer, it is reasonable to act with nothing, but you changed the numbers so outrageously that I feel really stupid even when I think about it with my toes. There are so many classic clips of business wars, and any copy of them will be well-received. I just want to ask the author, does he really have a concept of numbers? 6. You can know the general content of a single chapter by looking at the chapter title, but I still read it chapter by chapter. I didn't expect that the content was really empty and boring. The setting of the novel is okay, or in other words, this kind of setting is easy to write, and the author has a good hand and plays it to pieces.

I recommend making another one. The final ending is too hasty, but overall it's still good.

Although a lot of the plot is like a running account and a lot of the content is heavily templated, it didn't affect my enjoyment of watching it! The author is a professional experienced driver, the kind who can race like crazy in kindergarten lanes... You can decide whether to join the trap according to your preferences!

The plot is quite attractive. Although there are many unreasonable elements, I don't care what is reasonable after the system is out. The characters in it still have the IQs they should have, so I am quite satisfied.

Finished watching, looking forward to the second part (๑•.•๑)

It's too watery. There are only a few dozen chapters in the system, and it's like the weeds on the roadside don't exist. They are all about the daily interactions between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. They are always watery, live-streaming after dinner and spending the night, and occasionally talking about the progress, it's all in vain.

This book... Nb, you will understand instantly... It is not a good thing

Although it looks pretty, why is there so much water in the back (*￣m￣)