Siheyuan: Starting as a Temporary Worker in the Supplies Department

After reading more than fifty chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The first few dozen chapters were still readable. The first time Qin Huairu borrowed money, he refused. The second time, Qin Huairu borrowed money from the protagonist because his father was in the hospital. He was more or less involved with the Holy Mother. Later, when Bangge went to the protagonist's house to steal things, he still wanted to avoid making a big deal out of the situation and save face. He stopped being a dog licker and started to act like a virgin. Doesn't the protagonist who traveled to the past know who is in this courtyard? They have traveled through time and there are systems, but I always feel that the protagonist is a bit useless. Anyway, I didn't like the development of the story later on, so I gave up (the above is purely my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

The author's writing style is very good. I have seen some very good Siheyuan novels. As a bookworm with more than 30 years of experience, I can guarantee that this book will be a classic if it does not break down in the future! Big cheers for the author! I hope that my writing will be more exciting and faster in the future, and I will receive push notes every month.

Let me write some time. If you come in, read my comments to see if you can handle it. First. In the early stage, Qin Huairu, Damao and the second uncle looked a little uncomfortable. Second. Xu Damao used his own money to establish a relationship with the son of the third uncle? Third. Chapter 40 has not been corrected. If you are not a thief, do not climb up and become an official. You help so many people. Since you want the protagonist to be a helpful person or a virgin. Why write Qin Huairu like that? You also have to write about her falling into your arms. I saw a book review in which Qin Huairu and the protagonist also borrowed money. The protagonist borrowed money. I really don't know what the author wrote.

I saw Chapter 226 and deleted the book. 1. Mainly because as a time traveler, it has exposed its golden finger, and it has no ability to protect itself. It usually jumps too much and does nothing to cover it up. 2. I don't really like those people who write about serving the country wholeheartedly. I respect such people, but such people are very paranoid. If you have a golden finger, its first thought is to get it to benefit its comrades. 3. The country is a country for a group of privileged people, not for ordinary people, so don't beautify it in the book. The number of people who died in the natural disasters in the three years is still secretive. As for the subsequent 10~~ years, the entire period cannot be typed up to now. Your golden finger is exposed, it's already good enough that people don't drag you to slice it, but they still treat you kindly? Really ridiculous 4. The downfall of all time-travel literature systems is that they are exposed, exposed to the country, and their own wives. It can only be said that these authors are too naive, or have no brains.

I can't say that the writing is bad, it's just too bland. The time travel plus system is so poorly written. The system seems to be of no use other than reselling fruit. Pig's Foot is a holy mother, showing mercy wherever she goes. She's a chatterbox and wants everyone to meet her. Let's talk about it. I wrote several chapters about Silly Zhu's Momojiji. I wrote a lot about Qinhuai like Momojiji. There is no violence in the novel. Four words: It's tasteless. Halfway through, you will find that the writing is really boring.

The most touching thing is to vividly describe the society of an era. It also writes about the bright and dark aspects. The author is brave!

It's okay, not too messy, but the moral heavenly part is missing.

To be honest, when I read Siheyuan for the first time, I felt like watching a spy movie. I read novels for fun and don't want to waste my brain, so I persisted until it was time to give up the book. . For me, the early part of this book is good. Although the later part is also good, it is not suitable for me to read, so I can only rate it as average.

This book is good and well written. . .

The further back you go, the harder it is to see. Under the general environment, supplies are being provided in a high-profile manner. Who can withstand the final liquidation? When the vegetable market is open, it is either being exploited or being exploited on the way. It is annoying to watch. There were too many capitalists who made meritorious deeds in the past. Weren't they all liquidated in the end? Your father-in-law can withstand the merits of his actions.