Reborn at the End of the World, My Zombie Boyfriend, Don't Chase Me

I hope the author will write that Xia Zhihan and Fang Yibai finally live happily together until the end, okay? Please😣😣,

When it was written that Fang Yibai left Xia Zhihan, it was too absolute and did not fit Fang Yibai's character. When writing it, it could be said that he discussed it with Xia Zhihan before leaving. Moreover, it is written that the male protagonist picked up the female protagonist's golden dragon and jade pendant. Is this probably because the male protagonist took advantage of it? ! If the male protagonist doesn't take this jade pendant, the female protagonist can completely write a heroine story. Why does it need a male protagonist? If you write it like this. I think if you can change it, you should leave the big jade pendant to the heroine. After all, if the heroine uses the golden dragon, she can be more powerful, and the hero just abandons the heroine. Don't you think this article is very problematic? I only read about 50 chapters, and then I didn't read any further. If you said that there were changes later, then I have nothing to say, but the previous part I have read is really problematic, mainly when you wrote it. After you wrote it, I felt that you seemed to have changed the previous part. I forgot about it, especially one place, where the heroine had already obtained a space with a well inside, but you also said at the time that he gave the hero two bottles of water for him to take a bath. You thought it was a pity, because in the end of the world, water is very rare and very precious. Doesn't this fit in with the setting at all? You wrote something before, but later you pretended that you hadn't written it and re-wrote it. Moreover, someone also commented on it for you at that time. You also answered it, right? Anyway, I saw that you answered it, but the question is that in your answer, you did not change the content of the previous article, but just left it there, right? I think this needs to be changed, otherwise I really can't stand it. I would rather read ten classics than reading this thing. Classics are boring and boring, but the problem is that they do have literary talent, and their logic is very tight and very good. I think if you are good in high school, then your writing should not be like this. You have to think about how you wrote articles in high school, right?

It's okay, it's okay to pass the time when you're bored, but if you look at it a little more seriously, there will be lots of loopholes.

Not enough

There is no logic. It seemed okay at first, but the more I looked at it, the more logical it seemed. I was completely stunned when I saw a trace of intolerance in the eyes of a three-year-old boy.

A villain who can't be killed no matter how hard he tries, a supporting character whose outlook is completely ruined. Not to mention the supporting roles, the character of the heroine also collapsed. The male protagonist hurts himself, but his friends and relatives can still continue to fall in love with the male protagonist. There is really no one with this love brain. The male supporting cast is also disgusting. Tang Lei will only drag the heroine down, and use his jealousy to successfully make the heroine lonely and helpless to receive the lunch box. The heroine died, and because of his jealousy, Tang Lei violated the heroine's last wish and refused to allow the heroine's crystal core to be absorbed by the hero. In the end, even the heroine's crystal core was snatched away by the villain who was reborn again. I'm really speechless. The other male supporting actor, Yan Mingyu, is also super disgusting. The heroine obviously worked hard to conquer the country, but the heroine sacrificed her core and it was taken away. He was not even willing to snatch the heroine's core back. He always thought he was someone else.

Those who were deceived by the introduction thought that he would use a lot of pen and ink to describe family affection, but his brother appeared at the beginning. There is no description until Chapter 90. The logic of the heroine at the beginning is not problematic, but! The heroine made a deal with the old man. She said something about the end of the world, and she didn't want the Holy Mother. After hearing a love story, she gave away food and drink for free. The old man felt that she couldn't give the crystal core for free, so she gave him the bracelet she wanted, and she even said he didn't want it! Then the relationship between her and the male protagonist is also inexplicable. The male protagonist gives the crystal core he got to the female protagonist. The female protagonist asks him what reward he wants. The male protagonist says he doesn't want it. Later, the male protagonist says he wants beef. The female protagonist looks like someone else is taking his things for nothing. Isn't this an equivalent exchange? I don't think they have any emotional foundation. Because of inexplicable things, they suddenly became familiar with each other, and then because the male protagonist said he wanted to feel the heartbeat, the male and female protagonists became obsessed with each other. Liar! I promised to protect my brother, but my brother didn't even appear in two pages.

Update! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The author wonders what the two of them did! ! ! ! So looking forward to it! ! ! Why don't you update when you are so excited! ! ! ! Ah

Let me repost this, this is the best doomsday article I have ever read, but I don't like the ending of the story, Xia Zhihan... Is it worth it for you?

In her previous life, the heroine sold herself to a man to survive. She has never hated a man in this life. She fell in love with a handsome zombie when she met him, and there was no foreshadowing. In her previous life, her brother died for her, and her grandmother's ring was given to others. In this life, she quarreled with her brother over a man. She could jump out of an airplane for the man regardless of everyone in the East District just to prove that the man loved her. One moment I despise others for wanting to upgrade, the other moment I despise others for using essences, I hold the system and all the benefits from a high position, blaming others, attacking others' bases to take advantage of others, scolding them when I put the bowl down after picking up the bowl to eat. It's a cool story, with a heroine as the protagonist, but I really don't feel that it's exciting. It's been upgraded a little bit by hanging. It's a loser in the past life and has five powers in this life. It's just for love. It's a dry pie. When I saw her doubting her grandmother, I felt like giving up the novel. I stopped reading when I saw the quarrel with her brother. The whole world is a love brain, and everyone is the tie and assist of their love. This novel is just about falling in love, why does it need the whole world to accompany it? I didn't read it with my brain at first, but now I really can't stand it anymore. Why not watch the American TV series I Am a Zombie and the movie Warm Corpse, one is engaged in career and the other is engaged in love.