Rebirth 60: Mr. Li's Immortal Cultivating Wife

To be honest, the writing is a mess. When reading this novel, you cannot look at it with a sense of reality, prices, sofas, and the times. First: Just like writing a composition, it's an assembly line. Second: There is a shopping mall in the novel. How could there be a shopping mall in the 1960s? A few years ago, there were supply and marketing cooperatives but no shopping malls. When my mother was in junior high school in the 1970s, the tuition fee was 1 yuan. And the prices here are also a mess. When we were little, we had two candies for 1 cent each.

In fact, the plot is very interesting, but there are too many typos! ! !

It's so beautiful, the heroine is so understanding of the world, she has no pride in her cultivation, and she has good control.

Those comments are so cool, how did they come about, Holy Mother, I am becoming more and more holy in the future. I jumped to see the separation and thought it would be fine in the future. But in the end, the mother who was so bad to him ended up living together and raising a big family. What the hell?

It's quite good-looking, not sluggish, and very imaginative. The male protagonist's appearance rate is very low.

This book is really great, except for a few typos

The story is okay, but there are too many bugs and typos. In that era when it was easy to be criticized, except for military green, black, gray and blue, there would be no colorful clothes, no skirts, and no accessories. I hope the author does some work before writing. I gave up and went to read other novels.

I think it looks good

It's okay. I read it in one sitting. I really like the subject matter. Thank you to the author for your hard work. But in many places there is only a beginning but no end. Are you, the author, swallowing the text? It also ended hastily. The most important thing is the mother of the heroine. In the early stage, I was so frustrated that I couldn't bear it. Many characters appeared, but there was no ending. Many parts of the article were just written carelessly, all relying on my imagination! ! ! I hope that authors, including those who write in this genre, will be more serious about their works. I especially like modern articles about cultivating immortals. Many of them are unrealistic. I can understand whether cultivating immortals is different from our country. Full screen imagination. Many book friends think it's wrong. What happened in the 1960s? Why is it wrong? Why don't we think that there are no immortal cultivators in our world? I don't think it's the 1960s that suits us Chinese. The most important thing is not to scrawl the article.

Not good-looking, boring