Reborn, I Was Driven Mad with Kisses by a Possessive Tycoon

Help, the writing is so lustful, I like it so much, and the heroine is not a virgin at all, and she is not soft-hearted at all. It seems too relaxing. The author should update it quickly. It is not enough. I finished it in one go. The main reason is that it is really beautiful.

2023.9.29

Why is the rating so low? It deserves a higher rating o(╥╥)o

The writing style is indeed as mentioned in the good reviews. It is very good. There are often rhymes or ancient poems. However, the plot is messy. I feel that the focus is not on the male and female protagonists at all. The main body is not clear. There is no sense of progress after watching it for a long time. Moreover, the heroine is indeed as the review said. The execution is too poor. Everything is said coldly verbally. I have read more than 100 chapters and abandoned the article. I am really speechless about this plot.

It's good-looking, but there are some holes that haven't been filled in yet, but it's pretty good-looking.

Those who want to read a book are advised to avoid Lei Ha first. Uh... I feel very upset. I wonder where such a high rating comes from? I have read more than 100 chapters now, and I really can't stand it any longer... The revenge is written in such a way that it destroys all three views. The classmates who bullied the heroine in school were thrown naked on the street, and the heroine's relatives "fucked" them. I don't know what to say. I can only say it's disgusting. Moreover, the heroine is too squeamish. Although the heroine is said to be pampered, she is almost 20 years old, so why is she so young... And it doesn't feel like a sweet story. The male and female protagonists are slow to make progress and have no interest at all. They mostly just kiss each other. Is this a sweet story? It's not a cool article! It makes my heart hurt to see it! There are more than 60 chapters in which the male protagonist plays pg, which is so insane, and the female protagonist also acts coquettishly, oh my god. Although it is said that you don't need to use your brain to read novels, you can still feel itchy even if you don't use your brain.

The overall plot is very interesting, but there are too many intimate parts between the male and female protagonists (of course some people like to watch it, this is a matter of personal preference). Personally, I think it affects the compactness of the overall story. I don't think it is too much to reduce it by half...

The plot is barely understandable, but the writing is really bad. I won't go into detail about what "deafening" means. Don't just use the word randomly. There is a big difference between "deafening" and "deafening". Such boss novels usually describe the appearance of the heroine in terms of breathtaking beauty. I am really speechless. Is this how breathtaking is used? Thrilling, how scary it is, can't it be said that it's beautiful and captivating?

Great author, I wish the novels you write in the future will be very popular.

The heroine is stupid and acts like a virgin. She has no ability and has been relying on the hero. After being reborn, she always talks about revenge and knows how to talk about it. In the end, she commits a crime and devotes herself to the hero. She keeps letting the clowns who have been around to frame her feel a little disgusting. The heroine was stupid to death in her previous life and caused the death of her relatives and friends.