Warring States: Start with a Piece of Land

Brother, give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give it to me. Just one more chapter, just one more chapter, I will never touch it again, please brother, really, just one episode, I swear I will never touch this thing again, I really can't bear it anymore😭😭😭😭😭

It wasn't very good in the early stage, but started to show strength in the middle and late stages. Also, I really don't know. I'm a civil engineer, so why don't I use saltpeter to make black powder? Wouldn't it be better to just give primitive people a little shock?

The writing is good, but the updates are too slow😡😡😡

This book is mainly about comedy. It may be a little brainless in some parts, but as long as it doesn't take it too seriously, it's still worth reading. It's really funny. O(≧v≦)o

I personally don't like the trouble of reading it. The two names keep changing, just like writing in classical Chinese. If you have a name, you have to write the family name. The two names keep switching back and forth. Is it necessary to write this thing in a novel about Ersanzi? Ersanzi has many meanings, so you can just use it. You have to make it as if you are very cultured and use some ancient words.

6.5 Points is okay. But it's too boring to watch. These two or three things make me upset.

There is no rush for success like in time travel novels, gunpowder and spears come out in one go, and the scroll slowly opens. Flaws do not hide the virtues! I guess later on either the brothers turned against each other, or they turned against each other! Expect!

The writing is good, but the plot is too old: the protagonist is powerless, has an ideal of life and waits for death, and then explodes due to stimulation. This plot was okay in the early years, but it is too old now. 😳

I took a look at Chu Lingyi from the beginning to the 500th chapter. The protagonists are all famous all over the world. Even after they became regents, they did not get rid of this party. They treated the whole court as fools. The whole court was full of Lingyi's party. King Chu Huai was not afraid at all. He had no sense of crisis for those in power. Look at political creatures like kings and emperors. Everyone's sense of crisis is overwhelming. No matter whether he clearly understands the emperor, is confused or not, and wants the seat under his butt, as long as he feels threatened by someone, he will not care too much. Both foolish and wise kings will kill for their own butts. There are too many. Look at the King Huai you wrote. He is not even called a king. He is a retard. He is not even as good as Emperor Hui of Jin.

Just change the name to "Junior High School Author ~ Dreaming of Becoming a Boss during the Warring States Period". First, what will the soldiers eat when there is no food in the fief? 2. No one has rewarded me with ten gold coins for the poor jingle, but it turned out to be gold cakes. Instead of copper coins.