Black Lotus Growth Manual

It's been a long time since I've seen a real strong female theme. The heroine has strengths and weaknesses. Although she is a strong woman, she does not make the men around her look like trash. Each has its own characteristics. General Yan is calm and affectionate, but the prince hasn't noticed it yet. There are few scenes at the moment, with Lou Yue falling in love and killing each other. Although the female pig is a heartthrob, she is not a Mary Sue. I look forward to the future, and the author will quickly go to the code!

How should I put it? It's not a cool novel, both the heroine and the supporting characters have their own growth lines, which are quite obvious. The writing style is very calm, the plot advancement is reasonable, and the supporting characters are absolutely controllable. Each supporting character has his own story line.

There is no transition between the two scenes... It is very abrupt and the perception is poor... The narrative has no focus... It seems very dragging... The protagonist is said to be the heroine, but in fact it is more like a group portrait... I feel that the author wants to talk about too many things... There is no focus or priority... It becomes more and more boring after that... Just skipping a few chapters does not affect the reading... The ending ends very abruptly... It disappears suddenly... Below the middle...