Reborn in the 1970s, I’ll Build a Good Life with My Mom

There are too many redundant descriptions, and often one word or sentence ruins a plot. Also, is this Shen Qingshan the male protagonist? The brother who was traveling with him caught a thief, but he watched and ignored it. The thief took out a knife before he took action? The brother saw that the old lady was taking her granddaughter to seek medical treatment, so he gave him five yuan. Shen Qingshan sneered and said that the brother was a prodigal? I won't say whether your book is good or not. You have a wrong outlook on life.

He is very stubborn and says that speculation is not allowed, but he can buy and sell things openly, and there is also a wholesale market!

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It's okay from the front, but I can't stand it from the back. There is nothing rigorous about falling in love and getting married. There is no plot to get along. I immediately agreed to fall in love and get married.

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