Lingering Game

The writing in the front is very good, but the back part is a bit draggy. Overall, 9 points are okay. I really love the character of the heroine, who is independent, confident and tenacious. The hero's love for Bai Yueguang seems a little thin, and I didn't expect that Bai Yueguang has a purpose. There is nothing new in this writing, it is a bit old-fashioned, maybe to highlight the love for the heroine, but it can be written more delicately from a real perspective, so that it will be more immersive! Like it!

Don't cherish what you get, lose it, chase your wife at the crematorium Fortunately, the ending is perfect

The plot is pretty good and not too lengthy! But there are too many typos! 😓😓

The male protagonist can be said to be the weakest and stupidest overlord in history. He committed suicide twice because of his dead scheming Bai Yueguang, and the second time he committed suicide was because of something too trivial... And then he couldn't forget Bai Yueguang while trying his best to sleep with the female protagonist. He just sleeps, but he also abuses others. This abuse not only affects his heart, but also his body. He makes people drink and work for him. The reason for the abuse turned out to be because his father, as a passerby, did not help Bai Yueguang in his car accident? ! And it was reversed later. It was simply that he was too weak to find out the truth. I'm really speechless. Throughout the article, the characters of the male and female protagonists are extremely unattractive and have no clear purpose. The love of the female protagonist and the hatred of the male protagonist are equally inexplicable. Not recommended unless you are really curious about what the weakest overlord is.

Very beautiful

Not bad, 9 points, mainly because the whole story is not long and relatively complete. The disadvantage is that the author's writing style is not exciting enough, and in many places the narrative seems a bit straightforward without adding to the atmosphere. The advantage is that the foreshadowing is all explained, and each character has a cause and effect. Generally speaking, the story is a classic. The male protagonist approaches to take revenge on the female protagonist for Bai Yueguang, but finds out that he has taken revenge on the wrong person. In the process, he falls in love with the female protagonist. Bai Yueguang is not a good person, and he pursues his wife in the crematorium. The villain behind it is the illegitimate son of the hero's father (I thought he was deceived).

It's pretty good, but I didn't get enough of the ending. It would have been nice to have some extras or something.