A Flirt Gone Wrong

I read about 30 chapters, and although I didn't read the rest, I clearly saw many of the author's problems. First, the plot is obviously cliche. Even in 2024, it was completely unreliable. It was overdone at the beginning. It did not focus on the female direction like a female channel. Instead, it seemed like the lowliness of a slutty woman, and the principle of the heroine was not seen. Secondly, in the first 30 chapters, it can be seen that the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist first and has coveted her for many years. However, at least in the part I watched, it is really difficult to see the male protagonist's desire and cherishment, and even a sense of... Confrontation? In short, I can't feel the emotional transformation of a true love who has been in love for many years and still desires and is not able to take advantage of her. Thirdly, the author obviously did not try too hard to truly understand the relationships and rules in the male protagonist's circle. Instead, he described the story in a very cheap way, without feeling the emotion. Fourth, there are many illogical places in the book, and there are too many examples, so I won't list them one by one. I will summarize them at the last point. The author probably did not write the outline in advance, nor did he check it while writing. Fifth, the writing style is obviously immature. The details, psychology, actions, and even the process are not explained clearly. An action often appears suddenly, which is really confusing. You have to automatically figure out what happened, and the experience is very poor. Sixth, because the writing style portrays both the female protagonist and the male protagonist as stupid people with no brains at all. In the beginning, the female protagonist hooked up with the male protagonist, and the male protagonist just fell in love? No measures were taken? It can really be seen that he cherishes the female protagonist? Later, when he had a drink with the entertainment industry, it seemed that the male protagonist was very brainless and had already made the identity of the female protagonist public. I really can't understand that this is something you can do to someone you've loved for a long time, and then let someone else mess with that little girl. Isn't it really self-contradictory? (Note, this is also one of the points where logic doesn't make sense.) Also, the relationship between the heroine and the Gu family for so many years, could it be that they were just a little bit different before? I never thought about it, how come the Gu family didn't know that he was being bullied at school, and didn't say anything but let it happen for half a year and still be solved by the male protagonist? (This is another point of illogical logic) Even if you didn't think about it, you should be very trusting. Just because of a few sentences from your best friend, you have to go to the police to accuse him. The writing is very stupid and impulsive. It can be attributed to two points, poor logic and poor writing. There are many more that I won't go into. After all, I am also a writer of novels. I know the impact of a low score, so I'll give it an average rating. Also, personally, I don't want to argue with anyone.

Love to watch, like, update soon, I really like it ah ah ah ah

No beginning or end, no explanation of why Chang Qingshan and the heroine's father...? At the end, I didn't talk about Ruan and Fang.