Daming: I, a Commoner, Was Targeted by Lao Zhu

The character setting and storyline are quite exciting, but there are some typos that do not affect reading. I finished reading the updated bits and pieces in a while, so I urge you to update more!

The writing is good, but the plot could be optimized a little more. Come on, author, waiting for your update! 😛Come back and watch again after you gain weight!

The plot gradually advances, and there is a sense of immersion. The protagonist has a certain kind heart and is relatively positive.

Overall the writing is quite smooth, but the update speed is a bit slow!

It's good to watch. I think the plot is exciting and immersive. I'll update it soon.

Overall it's okay, but the characters are not very full of character and the plot is not very rich. I look forward to updating it.

I think the content is very exciting and the characters are rich, but the chapters are too few and not enough to read. I like the author to update more.

Zhang Quji is really interesting. There is actually a system. The author's writing is very good and some of it is really funny.

The author will update soon! Looking forward to(๑˙ー˙๑)💓💓 The plot is very interesting (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, and the plot is also very exciting! Urgent to update. Urgent to update.

There are too many typos, and the timeline of many events, items, and place names does not match up.