Hot Star: the Group's Pet Elf Raises a Sickly Admiral

I have read more than a hundred chapters. At first, I clicked it because I didn't see the later chapters. In fact, if I really evaluate it, it should be average. The plot is okay, but can you praise the heroine a little less? It's okay at the beginning, but it's really annoying in every subsequent chapter. And the name kept getting confused with the previous one, which made me scratch my head. You can take a look if you're just passing the time, but if you want to take a serious look, I don't mind. The atmosphere between the male and female protagonists is good. From the beginning to the end, apart from being jealous, everything is sweet.

To be fair, I personally think that this novel is pretty good overall👍👍There are only one or no typos in more than a hundred chapters, which is quite good. Furthermore, the fact that the heroine and the hero have absolute trust is a bit annoying to me👀 Male protagonist: Ji Yanyun Super super powerful interstellar war god! Imperial Admiral! Because he was too strong, his boss (Star Emperor) used tricks to destroy him and exiled him to the Black Star to fend for himself. At the moment of life and death, the heroine appeared and became the eternal light in Ji Yanyun's heart🌟🌟🌟 Heroine: Zhu Xiaoshui She has a super cute and goofy character, and is overall goofy. She is a little girl from the 21st century, and she has absolute trust in Ji Yanyun! I am also full of interest in unknown knowledge, just like a heartless little sun every day😃 But then again, the majestic interstellar god of war, the imperial admiral! Can you actually sew small clothes? ! Oh, the contrast is so cute😍 There is a section where Ji Yanyun measures the three dimensions of the enlarged elf, our heroine. Although Ji Yanyun likes Shuishui very much, he still keeps a distance during the measurement without any thoughts of taking advantage. This is really good😘😘 Shui Shui and Ji Yanyun are complementary beings. Although Shui Shui is stupid, he is definitely not a hindrance. Sometimes novel ideas can inspire Ji Yanyun, an old fox 😂 Ji Yanyun is the kind of person who smiles on the surface but doesn't know how you died afterwards. He is a person with 800 evil intentions in his body and is so wilt and bad💦💦

I was just confused (so confused). During the live broadcast, the male protagonist had already put on his face, and he was still calling the male protagonist's name. So what's the point of wearing a mask? The male protagonist has already tried that potion before, and is convinced of its effect. As a result, he only sold the potion that others bought for thousands of gold coins for two silver coins, just like they only sold it for a few cents when others sold it for thousands of gold coins.

The author's writing style is a bit green, and many of the words used are awkward. It would be better to change them. In order to highlight the intelligence of the male protagonist, the plot forcibly reduces everyone's intelligence, and there are some places where the logic does not make sense.