Siheyuan: After Qin Huairu Broke Off Their Engagement, Traveling Frog Went Online

Don't be fooled by the beginning. The whole story is full of quarrels and it's impossible to read. Also, the author's use of commas is so outrageous that it looks like he's stuttering.

Make do with it, make do with it

Reading a few words in one line makes me tired. It's too watery. A little thing can take up several chapters.

Is it practical to fit it closely? If you haven't watched the TV series Siheyuan, don't write about it. It's a waste of time.

Li Huaide actually helped Silly Zhu? Factory Director Yang refused to help the doctor who saved his life because of a chef, and still made peace with him? Could you please make it a little more outrageous?

There are more than 200 chapters in total, and it takes fifty or sixty chapters to hold a general meeting. It doesn't matter if it's good, but it's nothing.

If you don't know how to use punctuation marks, don't use them.

What are you writing about?

Why is it so late? The number of words is enough, isn't it?