I Transmigrated to a Famine Year and Became a Mother, with a System to Make Farming a Breeze

The heroine points out the Madonna's lack of wisdom. The story was originally quite good and should be praised, but the Madonna's lack of wisdom lowered the score a bit!

It looks good, but there are too many typos.

A bit tired

Too grindy,

It's too long-winded. One is exchanging food and the other is robbing food. This is too boring. I'm just trying to make up the word count.

It's really annoying. The heroine broke off her relationship with her mother, and then her mother came to her house to grab food within two days, and then said she wanted to report to the official. There was no movement for a long time, and I was speechless.

The story is good, but the writing is too verbose!!!