Something Is Wrong With This Ninja World

The writing in this fanfic is pretty good, there is no system or anything like that. There are a lot of typos, but it can be understood by people who have a rough understanding of Naruto. It is worth reading (I have finished reading it)

It is not too systematic, nor does it repeat the original plot. It is refreshing to have its own characters and a new plot direction. There is no long-winded ink in the middle of the article, and the writing is continuous and smooth. The ending is also quite good, without anticlimactic ending, which is quite good. I hope the author will continue to work hard!!!

Still more generous

It's so fake. The protagonist feels like he knows everything. He can cook, design clothes, and design dozens of sets. And he has memorized it. No one can remember it so clearly. He also knows the design of Tang Dao, knows how to cook all Chinese dishes, can jump over the wall, and has a shadow clone, which is even more outrageous. He also wrote a book. He remembered the famous book so clearly that he copied it directly. He also knows how to beautify, and what kind of Navy Six. I can't stand it after seeing this. As a time traveler, he has so many skills? And he speaks so well for an adult time traveler, and chats so happily with a group of children. The protagonist is really awesome.

I actually finished reading it

It's beautiful, the story is really good, and the author is very creative~

It's boring starting from the moment I open the vest trumpet. The original shadow clone transformed into Liu Angxing on his own initiative, and then he transformed into Hawkeye and Vegeta. It was very boring.

Most of the anecdotes are first-person dialogues, which are bland and without any ripples.

Dear author, can you take a look at it yourself? This is either a typo or a mistake, which affects your reading mentality. The sentences are not coherent at all, and some are so serious that you can't understand what they mean. It was originally very good, but if you do this, aren't you trying to persuade me to quit? Why do you think you make too much money? No more playing with flowers?

It's quite exciting, logical, has good laughs, and is just borderline.