Five Spirits Piaomiaolu

I take back the good review I gave at the beginning. At first I saw that the author created characters with distinct personalities and the plot of the story was very detailed. But the more I read, the more I read it. The description of the story is trivial and trivial. The stupid thing is that there are five protagonists. Isn't this a joke?

Advantages: The writing is okay, the plot idea is okay Disadvantages: 1. The inexplicable narrative technique of the storyteller. The more I read, the more I feel that the author is getting older. The large number of "not mentioned later" is even more inexplicable. You really don't want to mention it. "Not mentioned later" is usually used for less important characters who have no chance to appear later. It's good for the author to mention it after every plot. 2. I really like to see group portraits, but this is obviously because I originally wanted to write about the main protagonist, but then I divided it into five people abruptly, but the author didn't have that skill, so he wrote five people like a running account, with no priority, and it makes people collapse. 3. After reading half of the book, I didn't stop talking about it. The author also added the magic technique of summary. One thing was narrated from different people's mouths, and the things that happened after a few chapters were fully recalled. This finally succeeded in making me give up. In fact, the story idea is okay. Since this is the first article, why not write a wonderful short story? If you have to convert 2 million words into 5 million words, at least create a high-quality one first, and then cheat a little bit on the word count. I have also discarded a lot of junk articles and have not commented on them. Maybe this is really a pity. Let me write a comment.

This is a rare good book that I have read recently! The author's writing style is good, and the reading has a unique flavor. The characters are powerfully drawn and the personality is outstanding. The score of 8.5 Is even low. If the author would not be a mess, it should have a score of 9.8.

The plot was too slow. At first I felt that the author had a very grand vision. To achieve a high level, it should be more than a god. But when writing, I wanted to take everything into account. The five protagonists are too stupid. It took more than a thousand chapters to build the foundation and then it was over. What about the game you spoiled earlier? How powerful can a foundation builder be? It's just for readers to play. It's so high-rated. I really can't figure it out.

It's too wordy and watery.

The writing is very detailed and the writing style is also very good, but the pace is indeed too slow, making the plot seem a bit boring and dragging.

At first I thought it was water, but later I thought it was ink. In fact, it is said in a eloquent way. Write the growth of the five protagonists in detail. Take your time, it's pretty good.

Frequent spoilers, always talking about how you will achieve success after so many years... How you will meet again after so many years... It's disgusting enough, just read it.

I actually thought it was quite good at the beginning. After reading too many white articles, it was not bad to suddenly eat some fine rice bran. After reading more than ten chapters, I suddenly realized that, oh my god, this author is really too ambitious and has a heart for a masterpiece. His writing skills are too poor, the plot is dragging, and the chapters are wasted on useless things. From Chapter 7 to Chapter 19, it can be summarized in 3 sentences, and he has written tens of thousands of words. It's really too much, you're out of the realm of flesh and blood, you're just like Luo Li, and you still can't explain things clearly. Netizens should be cautious when entering the trap.

This novel is very good, the writing is very thoughtful and logical.