Sword Rain in the Empty Mountain

Very well written, I like it very much! The martial arts world constructed is wonderful, with vivid characters and ups and downs of the plot.

The writing is very good and the storyline is also very good

Not bad, you can take a look!

At the beginning, it was the beginning of a good story; at the beginning, it also continued the development of a good story. Unfortunately, after entering the middle section, all kinds of shortcomings piled up. I don't know about others. Anyway, I saw all kinds of negative emotions. By the last 20%, I could only tell the story directly. I reached the last page, and sure enough, the author seemed exhausted and ended it hastily - I must say that he is also a conscientious author with a good writing style. I have paid all the remaining votes for this month, hoping to continue to improve my writing skills and write better works. After all, it is not easy to conceive.

Well written

The writing is pretty good and the story is OK, but the ending is a bit hasty.

Not bad. The writing is very good and it's very comfortable to read.

Not bad, the writing is good, but the result is a bit rushed

It is repeatedly described that the protagonist is fearless to death, jumps in various traps, and survives for so long in the powerful world of Xianxia with weak skills. It is really a miracle.

Can the author take a look? I actually really like this book. I stayed up late to catch up on it, but why did the plot after Qingguo's death feel a bit confusing? It feels like I'm writing an article here and another there, and it doesn't have much to do with the main plot! It's really a pity