There Is a World of Immortality Inside Me

You are really bad at ink. You are a dignified golden elixir, and you are scheming with a group of people in the early stage of foundation building every day. If you are afraid of this and that, you should stop practicing. If you take a picture with such ink marks, you will be knocked unconscious by the golden elixir. Can't you just walk away after taking it? The main altar of the Demon Cult is there, can't you righteous people organize a siege? You can also send people to participate in your righteous foundation-building ceremony, which is hilarious. Yes, after all, the protagonist has no skills or martial arts except for a set of exercises. Walking around every day.

I keep repeating each one, and at the end and the beginning of each chapter I have to repeat a long paragraph. I don't know how to print this thing.

Seriously out of touch with reality, confusing logic, inferior work

Such a thing dares to come out and write a book. It should be remade.

I kept repairing and then fell back.

First of all, there is a sense of repetition. There are 1050 chapters, but in fact there are 600 chapters. The protagonist is a doormat, from beginning to end.

Messy

In this novel, Jin Danqi actually takes something from a mortal and then robs it in disguise. Immortal weapons from other worlds actually know things on earth. This is writing whatever you want.

Not as good as first grade primary school composition

This is the most confusing book I have ever read. It feels like the author skipped the writing and many plots have no beginning.