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. . . . . . Very good, worth watching

The writing is generally good, it would be better if it was more refreshing.

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I didn't read many chapters before I saw where Xia Xuan died. This is a disease of writing. Is this a time of total war? Didn't mention it. Are you going to let the newcomers come in directly? And he's still a newcomer who just knows what demon veins are? You said that the protagonist's special characteristics make it okay for him to be alone among the newcomers, but why should the others? Is the college short of people? Will a team die if they send a master to covertly protect them? Don't say things like "War is coming, who will give you time to prepare?" Is it appropriate for a newly recruited soldier to die so hastily? Or is Xia written to death just to let the protagonist experience life and death and change his heart? This is more cliché and disgusting 🤮

I'll talk a little bit about logic at the beginning, but after two or three hundred pictures, it's just childish and mindless fun stuff, and it makes me sick after reading too many of it.

The pace is too fast, one thing follows another, many things have no foreshadowing at all, they happen very suddenly, and many supporting characters have no extended foreshadowing. The sudden supporting roles seem very abrupt, giving people a feeling of rushing to the schedule. The writing is not wordy, and the emotional lines are also inexplicable. After saving people, I fall in love with the protagonist. Because he can control fire, he attracts the attention of girls and then falls in love with the protagonist. They were all sitting on the protagonist's lap and fed porridge. The protagonist also said that they are just friends. Even if they don't have feelings, they still don't have IQ. It gives people a feeling of being both upright and independent. Usually the protagonist's character is well developed, but when it comes to the relationship line, he is particularly wretched.

Has the author ever played with Itchy Mouse?

I only saw where Xia Xian died. The newcomer went directly to the battlefield. There was no protection for the internship, and he died directly. He was still a liberal arts student. It was explained earlier that the liberal arts student was responsible for logistics and intelligence, and then he directly died as an intern. Come on, you didn't learn anything here and went directly to the battlefield to die. Do you think this is the way people think? What's the difference between going to first grade today and taking the college entrance examination tomorrow? The subject matter is pretty good, but the logic really doesn't make sense.

It looks embarrassing!